Nice thank you for continuing to wright this story great job by the way and are u going to start the story about the Op Lil girl in equestria

Y'know, Nero is pretty chill about seeing his fellow humans smeared across the floor. And the genocide spells. I realize that it's kinda par for the course, but goddammit man! You're allowed to freak the fuck out a little.

Great update.

Minor typo though.

. She raised mu up and gently rolled me off her hoof

The Monk

Im sorry, I just can't let this slide.

Celestia answered quickly, as she passed out small Blue balls to each of the guards

So what your saying, is that Celestia basically gave all the guards blue balls.

: )

The Monk

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Im afraid I dont understand your question, could you elaborate?

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You have no Idea how many times I told myself "I can't put that in the story..."
But my soul said "You can't take that back, its too funny"

Very nice! I hope that when he gets to meet Mane6, I hope that Applejack will keep hating the humans even after she figured out they are smart :3

Survial Can Be Harder

Nero, if your awake then move towards me.

I'll cast it on the three of us, so we can all talk relatively normal.

Your going to continue dating?

Before I knew what he was.

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I vowed to talk to and treat then

"No!" She perked up immediately, and gently shook her head.

I notice that you said gently, but I am still impressed by his ability to remain on her snout during any head movement at all.

I already have a heard enough time being around you adorable ponies as it is, I don't need you to make it worse!"

Jeeze, calm down mare! Yes, your just like your sister. Now please, for the love of all that is manly, don't cry in front of me.. You'll make me cry as well.

And you can be sure, that I won't trade you in for another human. Your mine!

These are Enchanted with an modified Telepathy spell

Perhaps the mutations a different depending on instinct, or even so much as genetics.

hell, they might have been crushed on the way in the bathroom for all I know.

People, and ponies, tend to avoid the front of their hair to avoid getting soap in there eyes, especially if you've got a lot of hair.

tons of Pink flash and fur that bel0nged to this adorable pony.

Sorry to say, but your definitely Pink, But I can definitely talk.

A stallions voice echoed in both of there heads, causing the Two mares to look down in shock.

In a flash of Pink,

Pink is an adjective, not a proper noun. You should not be capitalizing every instance of it.

You said, that he told you to say that?

she could clearly feel that invisible line linking the Two of them.

You should really proofread your work before you publish it. This is embarrassing.

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But I do those things on purpose.. I feel that capitalizing a colour makes them stick out more, so people really imagine the colour as they read. I know its not grammatically correct, but you're also the first of all my readers to point it out. So kudos to you

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These sort of things tend to jump out at me. As long as there's a reason for it beyond sheer ignorance.

I really wished they weren't that tiny. I sometimes don't see what's so grand about stories like this(or people that might get turn on by this). At least make them indestructible dang it!

8028384 It makes them literally nothing. That's what is interesting. Just specks among the godlike ponies. They have all the power, killing them without even noticing.

It is strange how the ponies turn exact 180 on humans when they find out they are smart. Some ponies, like Applejack, shouldn't, so we can keep things interesting :D

Someone plz tell me this story's not dead I've grown to enjoy this to much

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Not dead, more 'Hiatus' I guess would be the word for it. I have a chapter in the works, but.. I've been distracted. Sorry

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Please, is the hiatus over? :)

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He also said earlier (as all of the chapter are the same day) he's basically ran out of freak-outs today.

You still working on this story? I really do enjoy this.

Will you continue? I'd pay you for each new chapter :)

I cant believe they kill humans just cuz they think they are bugs