You are very, very good. So subtle, so sinister ... I love this story.

Nice to see Starlight return to Rarity. Definitely wondering about that special order, but I can wait. Starlight certainly has to be subtle and smart about how she hypnotizes the others. Rarity is certainly going to need time to be as submissive as Twilight is and taking it slowly will allow Starlight to keep up with the hypnosis without Rarity's keen eye taking note of something wrong.

Augh! Why must you keep writing amazing chapters only to tease me with the prospect of even better chapters?!

Sneaky way to keep Rarity pliant. Wonder if next chapter we'll see her take Twilight down another step, or hypnotize another friend.

Now I just need to figure out how to really breakout, get on the featured page for more than 10 minutes on a slow story day. There must be some sort of pony marketing.

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This is rated well enough that it's possible to get up there with the right timing; so long as there's not too many other stories with high heat it'll show up on update. Otherwise only real way to market fics is to add it to the right groups. It's already in the main one for hypnosis, though.

it just keeps getting better
cant wait for the next chapter!

Next chapter will be up this weekend, with a special bonus!

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Oh boy, I love bonuses. Especially ones related to hypnosis stories.

I rather hope Starlight will do something with the fact that Rarity keeps picturing guys in her sex fantasies. Other than just overwrite her to be gay, that is.

She took her time in the shower, knowing that being alone would be just as pleasurable for Twi as long as she was being a perfect submissive. The shower was a good place to plan as well. Cadance was expected to give birth in less than a week. Once she did they would all head off to the Crystal Empire. Starlight hoped to have a few key objectives finished before that took place. Today’s agenda involved more focus....on.... Rarity. Her special order should have been completed by now. It had been four days since she had hypnotized Rarity and she was also due for a check-up.

damn this is good