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Oh dear.
DisQuord is using Picards trial as an example.
I wonder if he is going to Use that setting, and its basis, as a base for examples to give to Starlight.
Up to, and even through, the Gates Of Hell?
After all Starlight.
The Truth Shall Set You Free.
So ... is this the picture of Discord you are thinking of?
https://images2.minutemediacdn.com/image/fetch/w_850,h_560,c_fill,g_auto,f_auto/https%3A%2F%2Fredshirtsalwaysdie.com%2Ffiles%2Fimage-exchange%2F2017%2F07%2Fie_19602-850x560.jpeg
Probably needs "turning" in there somewhere.
Ok, let's actually look at this.
Ignoring the "revenge" factor, and the whole "I can come out on top", two questions to address:
1, has she actually hurt anyone that she has 'tized, and
2, Has she made anything/anyone better?
Rarity is probably the easiest to address. Nothing to harm her dress making, and frankly, expanding her business to cover more stuff? As a business woman, ... yeah, I have to say this makes her stuff better. And, Harm?
Is forced denial/edging harm?
Is giving someone a new outlet for their creativity bad?
... This ...
As much as I *want* to think of her as a horrible evil overlord ... step back.
She gave both of them some needed therapy treatment. And, she managed to give two submissives the chance to enjoy what they both thought was each other while being fully submissive.
... Harm? ...
I might have to re-read this whole thing. Taking away free choice? Sure. Did she do it any more than our normal environment / people around us? ... Maybe. Harm? ...
Outside of Rainbow Dash ... I can't think of anything off hand.
Rarity comes close ...
mmm... Slavery ... is probably the strongest charge there. Subverting free will ... which of them are actually behaving differently / in a way they would not have? Rainbow Dash, but even she has the underlying distrust/dislike of Starlight.
Bad Friend? ... Yeah, this one, Discord is dead-on with. Even if Starlight's goals include improving her friends, it's not that she is doing this with that as the goal. Her goal is revenge; improving the value/quality of "her collection" is secondary.
I will say this: The whole "What would Discord do if she goes after Fluttershy" was well handled. The whole "if she knows about Fluttershy and Discord, then she won't try for Fluttershy" ... was addressed, well enough, and she actually thought she could just talk to him?
Felt like you were coasting for a few chapters there, although it was enjoyable. Here’s a really consequential chapter to give the overall plot a kick in the plot. Just what was needed.
Prosecutor Discord didn’t mention the incest between Twilight and Shining, that’s very arguably “harm” too. Will Star claim Discord is “harming” her now that the boot might well be on the other limb?
Oh, this was exquisite. They say everything you put out into the world comes back threefold, but Discord's feeling generous. Eagerly looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.
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...I mean, it doesn't matter what she did, they didn't give consent and they would most certainly not agree to being changed that way. Non-con hypnosis and mind control are hot but let's not conflate them with positive deeds :P
Anyway, fun chapter! Discord was honestly written really well, which is not easy to do. Looking forward to how this pans out.
I like that Starlight defended herself pretty well considering how blatantly evil mind control is. She would still justify her actions to herself, wouldn't she.
I guess now we get some fun seeing what Discord does. Will be eventually let her go or will she turn his punishment against him somehow?
Oooooh, things are getting tense. How’s star gunna get outta this one lads. Can’t wait
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Absolutely. Non-con hypnosis is a bad thing.
I mean ...
https://youtu.be/1d09C-wNuc0?list=PL4pRsQsJLtNXfIXGijGxuT-hsbhI_tNNh&t=250
It's not like canon Starlight will combine three spells for friendship all at once, without consent -- oh, yes, it is *exactly* that :-)
(Not the scene I was looking for, but a good and relevant one.)
Im kinda hoping star does not get out of this one.
I'm insanely curious to see Star's plan for dealing with our favorite Draconequus. As much as I enjoy a good 'villain wins' story, I'm equally vested in not having a simple deus-ex- machina conclusion.
Well, there was little chance against Discord, even if she offered Fluttershy as a whore to him
Would love to see Starlight somehow get away with it
I'm guessing this came about because you felt like the story didn't have enough conflict or problems to overcome, or you felt that ignoring Discord's existence when it came to Fluttershy would be too much of a plot-hole. We're already in an anthro universe though, so no Discord would have been fine; I wouldn't have noticed or minded...
Or maybe I'm overthinking it and you just wanted to play with all the scenarios that come up next chapter. You wrote Discord well, it didn't hurt anything, but I'm hopeful we have a lot less of Starlight not in control in future updates.