Wow, the story just ended up on the featured section! It was a magic ride, up there for nearly 10 minutes :p

All that wait for a chapter without any kinky hypno stuff?!
Oblivious Pinkie is silly and adorable in this one, but I have my needs.

No really, great chapter. Looking forward to seeing more of it again.

8050524 We will see to meeting your needs next chapter

I'm still reading to find out what Starlight implanted in Spike's head.

Do you know why the art is called "Fan Starlight Glimmer"?

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8050812 Mauoz is Chilean and Spanish is his first language. I believe it just means fanart of Starlight Glimmer.

8050679 The ultimate reveal of what suggestions Spike is under comes in Chapter 10

Starlight's restraint at hypnotizing Twilight in public seems to have paid off. Pinkie sure was nosey to stalk them that long.

alright.. a little well placed filler. Serves well.
cant wait to see whats in store. Keep it up

Very nice chapter that certainly seems like a breather chapter with Pinkie seeing how Starlight and Twilight's relationship looks in public and behind closed doors. It was fun to see things like the footsie to their soft kiss to the submission from Pinkie's viewpoint. Of course, while seeming fun, I'm sure Starlight would not like it if she knew Pinkie knew. Pinkie has the innocent idea of them just being in love and being into kinky sex, but if that news got out before Starlight can finish her plan this would mark the start of her downfall.

It's now a a game of whether Starlight realizes she needs to hypnotize Pinkie first or if Pinkie realizes that Twilight and more have been hypnotized by Starlight and no one knows that game is currently afoot. Whoever is the first to get a clue of what the other is up to has the advantage and this is a great way to start making us tense and guessing what will result of this, whether it's next chapter or further down the line. With Starlight and Pinkie, who can say what will happen.

Lol Pinkie Pie

seems pinky has written it off as love at first sight but i feel she be one of the first to relise something is actuly wrong. she saw through the fake smiles after all so she'll know when she sees a hypno smile.

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Will she? Twilight genuinely believes the things Starlight is implanting in her mind, that's the point of the hypnosis: to make Twilight believe whatever Starlight desires.

8054838 I'm sure there are more typos out there, thank you for pointing this out, it's fixed now.

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tur but Starlight is taking it slow and doing so bit by bit (they smart way if you ask me) but can easly get ruined and giving the chotic nature of pinkie I belive murphy's law might win in the end.

So... Is Spike going to join them?

8067243 Spike will get more attention soon

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Starlight definitely seemed to, er, "value" his physique; presumably she has held off on doing more than instruct him to masturbate because she was waiting for sufficiently firm control of other slaves that they won't object to sex with him.

Or what if Starlight isn’t really reformed, has Twilight under some spell, and is secretly plotting to get revenge on us all?”

I like the fact that Pinkie with this shows her random nature and also nearly catches on to Starlight's plan.

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It's now a a game of whether Starlight realizes she needs to hypnotize Pinkie first or if Pinkie realizes that Twilight and more have been hypnotized by Starlight and no one knows that game is currently afoot.

But she doesn't.

Absent any meta-knowledge, everything she sees will fit the observed "they are dating and having kinky sex play", and that is actually true.

If it were anyone but pinkie that saw this, that would be the end of it. Even the induction stuff we saw last chapter would fit the whole "Now, my submissive, listen to me about being a good submissive" sex play.

If Pinkie gets some meta-awareness of "there's something more going on", then things might change -- but heck, other than the one "accurate guess" at the start of the chapter, there's nothing to give any reason for more investigation or worry.

“Oh, lots of reasons.” Rarity giggled softly. “Really Pinkie, I’m absolutely certain nothing untoward is happening. Don’t disturb her.”
Pinkie walked away from the boutique, counting off on her fingers. “Fluttershy and Rarity won’t help, Rainbow Dash is still off in the mountains training, and Applejack is at Sweet Apple Acres and I really don’t want to have to walk all the way out there. It looks like it’s up to me.”

this crazy mare just cant leave things alone even when her friends are telling her to

She wondered why Spike had reacted so oddly to her perfectly innocent questions.

but they arent innocent, theyre invasive.

Thus began operation Spy on Twilight and/or Starlight Until They Spill the Beans.

there are so few versions of Pinkie that i like, and this one is not one of them