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Wow, and the thing is, it is actually possible.
Wow, very good. Im actually kinda excited for this :)
I actually really enjoy this. Keep up the good work!
Humans with wings, my favorite sort of humanization.
Please, do continue! I like where this is going.
How often do you think you'll be updating it?
Interesting!
Not a fan of humanized, but I love the story concept.
7705903 Circumstances permitting, there will be one or two updates a week. As a treat, the next chapter will be up this very afternoon.
7706234 Alright then cooleo
I really like the premise of this! It has a lot of potential.
Looking forward to the next chapter eagerly.
Very well written, draws the reader in quickly and gets us excited for how this will go. The way you've written Starlight makes me want to see her win.
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Not to mention in-character for Starlight.
Interesting start. I'm not opposed to the idea of sexytime shenanigans with hypnosis, but even more intriguing would be if Twilight ended up slowly converting Starlight into a good guy despite the fact that she is hypnotized all the time and living in a fantasy world. If Starlight continues to make Twilight recount the justifications that her brain generates and what she would do in those circumstances, and Twilight is just so nice and friendly to Imaginary!Starlight, Real!Starlight could end up struggling with her conscience and become jealous of the Starlight in Twilight's fantasy, wishing it could all be real. Ending up with Starlight being subverted despite being in control at all times.
I think that would be pretty interesting, but that's probably not what's going to happen here. If it is, though, give me a hint, so I can give reading this story a higher priority!
Sunburst IMHO is too interesting a character for him just to be a lie that Starlight Glimmer made up, why do writers always want to "get rid of" him?
Dang, this is such an interesting concept. And I agree -- absolutely in character for Starlight, and Twilight's desire for reforming villains would have her happy to "win" -- especially when Starlight plays along after waking up.