*MY SPECIAL HALLOWEEN STORY!*
Every full moon on the eve of the sunset and where the day becomes the night, Fluttershy turns back into the creature of the night known as Flutterbat. Every time that the yellow coated pegasus turns, in the morning - she always forgets. She forgets everything that happened the night before. That is, until one night, where the Flutterbat meets another creature - a shadowbolt...
Each night for months, the Flutterbat and Shadowbolt Dash met up to cause chaos on the town, scaring the local citizens and taking all of the best apples from the apple trees in Sweet Apple Acres. Until one morning, where both Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy wake up, only to find that they're in the same bed. What has been happening to them?
Dedicated to Mister Phoenix
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Umm... It hard to say if I like a story based off the first chapter, I won't be able to read the rest of this story, even through I think it will end up being great. I just would like to remind everyone reading this story, this was my idea and it is much better than just going trick and treatin'
I'll link this story in a soon to be blog so more people will read it. Final thoughts time, I did like parts of it. I think there must be a easy way to shirten Shadowbolt Dash like maybe Shadowbolt, Shadow, Bolt or the one in the story SD.
I don't know what I don't like about this it hard to see of something is good or bad just from the first chapter.
MOAR BABY I WANT MOAR!
and as such, I'm blogging about it to recommend I to eat errors who for lows me who doesn't know.
I already know that this story is the definition of awesomeness.
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I think I'll continue with using SD. I will certainly consider Shadowbolt too though.
Whatever it may be that isn't so good about the story, I'll be sure to make improvements in the future chapters.
There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism/feedback.
I kept thinking that they were just going to prank they're alt selves for the hell of it by putting them in the same bed. But the romance bit is alright, also the flutterbat stall seen was priceless
BTW, how is "Shadowbolt dash" a monster exactly? seems more a literal alt-personality than a monster. Not even a really good one because it acts exactly like her.
7734251 Well, Shadowbolt Dash, as you said, isn't really a monster anyway. It's just simply a persona that she chooses to take on, I guess.
1. They probably did do that. Strange how Dash doesn't remember what happened though, seeing as she technically is still herself. But eeh, let's just roll with it.
2. Glad to hear you liked that part.
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What is your actual opinion on this story then?
I liked this story and want to see it continued so, please update soon.
Hiya everypony! Long time no see, huh?
In case any of you who have previously read this story have noticed, the word count may have changed a little bit. That's because I did a little bit of cleanup - making minor grammatical adjustments so that everything sounds better and more correct.
I can't say when this or my other story will next get updated - in terms of new chapters - as admittedly my interest in this franchise and shipping isn't quite as high as it once was.
BUT FEAR NOT! If I ever get the motivation back to continue them, you can bet your apples that I'll do just that.
Until then, happy reading all!