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Did you get this from "You vs. Sunset Shimmer?"
7542172 Never heard of it. It's a redone version of a story way back in 2013 and wanted to restart so I could do a better job of it. Original version is still on both my tumblr and FurAffinity.
7542262 well that story has an opening going word for word the same thing this story did except in that story Sunset Shimmer rapes you and whores you out
7542262 also I'm not trying to say you took anybody's idea or anything. I'm just pointing it out because the opening paragraphs of that story are just similar to this one
7542275 This story certainly isn't going in that direction.
I love this story, can't wait for chapter two.
7551713 Hopefully I can stop procrastinating and get it typed up some time over the next week. :p
7551795 Yay!!
Please moar!
Looks interesting, ill keep an eye it.
Damn! Love this story. Don't know why, but man is it hot.
She deserved that.
I eagerly await your next update.
7643989 agreed. teasing à men will only make it worst for the women after
I'm loving this so far. I also know the comic this is based on and I'm glad you're expanding on it.
7807832 Which comic would that be, out of curiosity?
I hope Rally gets his wish of getting in on the shower time
HOT!!! Shower scene, sexy, your character Rally is one lucky kid to fuck the hottest principal ever! Your story rocks, including the comic version.
After reading this, I must ask. Could you consider doing another shower chapter but have Luna in on the fun?
7945889 Rally considers himself lucky that Celestia is showing an interest in him at all. Doubt he's gonna ruin that for anything. ;)
7946950 Just a suggestion for a one time deal. I'd think Luna wouldn't mind since she shares a shower with her sister.
7946993 There's a big difference between her sister (Celestia was just saying they did those things to tease Rally) and a school student. Just because her sister's morals are questionable doesn't mean hers are. Besides, Luna met a guy the night before and she's hoping that gets serious.
7947241 Fair pair. Hope I didn't cause any trouble.
Still amazing. Please keep it going.
I wonder if Luna would not want to do this at the instigation of Celestia?
7957531 So many asks about Luna... o_O
7957540 That's because most of us are over the moon about her
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Not trying to be a bummer, but are the authorities gonna get involved?
I'm having the moral dilemma of whether this is right, through the facts that:
Yes, he's eighteen, which technically makes him an adult. Also, he has no ties to a guardian except with the apple family where they are providing him a place to stay, food, etc. He's basically been on his own for four years.
VS.
The fact that he's still in high school and he's having a sexual relationship with the principal of said high school. Not to mention that Celestia's about twice his age, give or take a few years (not that it's a bad thing).
So he's an adult... but still in high school. If he drops out it's okay, but if not... Lol. It's fun thinking about this.
I can see this blowing up to the point where moral values of the characters will be tried and tested... which will make an amazing story.
So far, good story. Can't wait for more.
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That is a well thought out reply. As far as authorities go, I didn't have any plans to do it but I'm sure there will be a near miss or two in the story. That's not to say it won't happen, but if it doesn't end up happening I might end up doing some what-ifs in a separate submission to cover stuff like that.
I tip my hat to you *hat tip*
I know you've done more but I'm going to say this either way;
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Consider this tracked mate. Keep it up
Hot damn. The classic under the desk cliche and it works. Bravo.
Sssssooo... when next update :3,
*scratches head, looks at floor* I want more ploeeeerrrr, I mean story. yeah story, hehe
great story, nice *ahem* plot
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Good news is that I'm finally doing something about getting it typed up so soon.
Still a fan of this story. Keep going.
Keep it coming.
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I need to find some time to get writing done, that's the problem. :/
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I understand completely. I'm a college student with a part time job. So believe me, I know where you're coming from.
Glad your back. Can't wait for more of this.
Can't wait for more
Glad your not dead.
Good to see you back.
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Thanks for the welcome back guys, I really appreciate it. ^^
Welp this story's dead
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No, my computer has been dead for over a month so I haven't been able to type up the next finished part of the story. :/
YES
Hey, it’s Tyler Perry. All of those films are shit.
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Amen to that..
Finally! I was wondering if there was gonna be an update anytime soon. Glad to see that the pacing between Rally and Celestia is going smoothly still.
This escalated quickly. She went from "hmm I dont know what to do, I dont like him like that" to "gimme that D" in 10 seconds flat.
Good to see this back. Keep it up dude