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Comments ( 22 )

You... really turned this in a Story.

Awesome chapters you are doing a amazing job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Ok I'm very confused this story jumped from something that was going...ok but intresting to down right dumb, random and nothing to do with the current direction the story was going.

Seriously it's now stupid. What the heck....

It is painful to read ^^"

Vegata busts through like the cool aid man saying "Hell yeah I am!!!!"

"I think I need an adult"

"I am an adult"

Next comment should have totally been

"I need a different adult"

Pretty good work man, i enjoy the story so far though the read is a bit, weird. If you'd like the help i could be an editor for you. You know, proofreading, grammar checks, even flow management. Anyway, just an offer, keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter.:twilightsmile:

8151876 Can't link ya. Against sight, rules to link pornographic content that isn't another stroy.

What a strange family.

Oh, crap baskets.

Ha! Now that's what I call a good ending. Great job!

Screw you Crab! you just want to have the last say in things. Yes the took months to apologize but at least they tired and she demon comment that's alow blow.

Ok, what??? Seriously, what??

8591161 When it takes months to come up with an apology instead of doing it almost immediately or at the very least the next day or within the same week, they lost all credibility that they actually care about the apology and are now only doing it to make themselves feel better. And the Sunset comment was well deserved, she nearly screwed the world over with her demonic episode so she had it coming, you don't get to transform into a demon to lead a hostile invasion of another world with brainwashed/mindcontrolled students as an army and then be magically forgiven and for everyone to act like it never happened.

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If he doesn't want their apology... then well, screw him. He doesn't have to accept it, but if they offer and he rejects it, it's on him.

But my guts say they'll all be made to feel terrible so he can revel in it.

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Why do you even want to know? Just asking.
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I love dit. Gives an air of reality. Its good. A decent meal.

Since it is your first time I will be gentle. Now hold still as I reach deep inside and grab hold of your essence.

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