Spike meets a Changeling stuck in a tree so Spike helps him out. Later that day they become friends and hang out for months after that. Till one day another changeling finds them and ends up killing the CMC and the changeling that is Spikes friend is blamed. His life and Spike life are both cut short but they and the CMC make one last appearance until years later a new Prince Of friend ship sees them and the mane six all in the field of their graves. He is handed a book by the former princess and reads it.
Chapters (5)
The title and description don't go together at all. How is there friendship when there is death? That makes no sense. Plus, this seems like a story that should be a little lengthy, but is little over 4,000 words. Before I read, I must ask what even happens in this story?
Self-insert, check. Try not to use these.
Poor editing, check. Get a better editor.
Wangst, check. Pity is the ugliest thing. Please try to avoid using it.
Gonna have to leave a thumbs down, m8.
7497029 sorry about that I am new to writing fanfic and the death is through out the story in the story Spike meets a changeling(Had to come up with the name so I use chris) and later on the changeling is blamed for a crime and killed read the story to find out what happens after that if you want
I was interested in reading this fic. Now I'm looking at the grammar of the synopsis and the chapter headers... I think I'll give it a pass now. Sorry.
Thumbs down due to 14 spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes in the synopsis alone. I'll read the story once you get yourself an editor.
meeehhh 4/10 idea 2 points and 2 points for trying