True Friends till the end

by Chris Abbey

One last time to see eachother

After many years the mane six had died and where buried next to the graves of the CMC and there friend, They each had their cute mark on their graves and where all together once again. One day a pony who was walking through the meadow his name was SilverSoul and heard a noise and turned around to see three ponies flying in the air they looked old and on the ground was a young looking alicorn and next to her the ponies flying through the air had landed on her left side and on her other side stood four other ponies and a dragon.

I had looked at them and got a feeling of comfort and noticed that they had seen me and I seen the Princess calling me forward so as I got closer she was holding a book out for me to take and I was worried when I looked into her eyes I was not scared but found hope and comfort. She did not say anything but got up and walked towards the sun. The other ponies got up and followed her including the dragon who stood next to her side.
I had looked at them then looked at the book for one sec as I looked back up they where gone and I felt as if they where not their anymore. It was weird but then I opened the book I got from the princess and sat down and started to read the title. On the title was the words Friendship Last forever and as I looked around just for a second I had an image flash into my mind it was all the ponies they looked younger and happier there was also the changeling and the dragon and behind them had been a castle that I knew too well.

It was an empty castle now but I was not worried I could always clean it up. I was made into an alicorn thanks to Princess Celestia after many years she sent me to ponyville to go and become it new ruler and make sure everything was ok. She sent me to the castle of her old student Twilight Sparkle and it felt empty but later today I would move in but first I opened to the first page and read it and kept on reading the book.

I did not realize it was dark until I looked up I was done with the book and was crying as I was reading the last few words were "You shall do many great things as you will live longer then me maybe forever. But remember that even if your friends die that you will always have the memories of the friendship you had made with many ponies just like I did and it will last forever new Prince". Signed Twilight Sparkle

With those words I cried for a couple of minutes and started to head to my new home the castle near the other side of ponyville and knew that I was going to be good and make sure friendship last forever and protect this land for as long as I live. The End

Author's Note:

Yes I am including my OC as an Alicorn to make sure that people can see that no matter what happens and who you meet that sometimes that some friendships do last forever and thank you for reading my book hope you enjoy it.
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Comments

[Jingle_Boii]

The title and description don't go together at all. How is there friendship when there is death? That makes no sense. Plus, this seems like a story that should be a little lengthy, but is little over 4,000 words. Before I read, I must ask what even happens in this story?

[DAMN HAMSTER]

Self-insert, check. Try not to use these.
Poor editing, check. Get a better editor.
Wangst, check. Pity is the ugliest thing. Please try to avoid using it.
Gonna have to leave a thumbs down, m8.

[Chris Abbey]

7497029 sorry about that I am new to writing fanfic and the death is through out the story in the story Spike meets a changeling(Had to come up with the name so I use chris) and later on the changeling is blamed for a crime and killed read the story to find out what happens after that if you want

[deadpansnarker]

I was interested in reading this fic. Now I'm looking at the grammar of the synopsis and the chapter headers... I think I'll give it a pass now. Sorry.

[i_am_the_jam]

Thumbs down due to 14 spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes in the synopsis alone. I'll read the story once you get yourself an editor.

[Rye Snoot]

meeehhh 4/10 idea 2 points and 2 points for trying