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My fucking heart man. You're making me cry. Poor Frank.
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This pretty much sums up how I feel.
I wonder if Frank will end up meeting Ratet, could be a good experience.
Im trying to get the lesson here, Twi and Frank are the focus, is She going to hand over the world saving to Satrlight and move on or is she's gonna keep doing her job, just like Frank does his?
I never understood pony logic: killing someome is bad, bad, bad. But trapping him forever or at least for the rest of his life in the Moon, stone, Tartarus or in a 6 X 9 solitary cell until his sanity shatters, and beyond, is ok.
Mmm... that was sad.
Also Twilight... no prison is inescapable, Hehehe, you're so silly~
Nicely done man, once more! Freaking love this.
It is really frustrating to see Twilight constantly complaining about having to fight evil while spitting in the face of the one man who would do her job for her and stop them comming back for good. She complains that Tirek keeps comming back and yet sees the man who would stop him from comming back as a larger threat. At the very least Celestia and Twilight really need to get their priorities straight, the logical choice would be to leave the one that hasn't hurt a single innocent and focus on the demon Lord bent on ending the world I mean ffs , do they even have two brain cells between them to try to rub together? Is there a spark up there at all?
Well. That's why he wants to kill Tirek... Good on ya, mate!
Twilight is being awfully whiny. And Celestia is being rather unsupportive...
Why don't you just dump your element on somepony else and leave them to go fight evil?
We can do that?
Sure! It's pretty much what I did when I dumped them all on you and your friends!
....
Of course, I handled all the evils in Equestria all by myself... For a thousand years before I found somepony dumb enough.. .er. . I mean.. worthy of wielding them.
But hey, I'm sure you can be replaced after just a year or two! That Glimmer chick would probably do!
...
You know, you can be a real bitch Celestia.
Strange. Luna sad the same thing before I banished her. Oh well! Let's go hunt the human and ignore the omega level threat to civilization for another few days! Wheeee!
Is Luna gonnna pop up to reveal what she learned from his dreams?
Or did he just not have any?
Twi's gonna feel like a real ass if Frank manages to kill Tirek, and save her and her friends in the process, along with ALL of Equestria.
Well, may I just away this, Tirek your situation is F.U.B.A.R Fucked Up Beyond All Recognition
Am I right?
I think poor Twilight is going to break in this story forcing Starlight into position as element of magic or all the elements will stop working for a while. She needs several weeks of decompression and doing nothing as her logic has gone completely out of wack.
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I personally think that she is going to become a host for the Spirit of Vengeance. Then she tries the Penitence Stare on Frank and it fails. It would intersting to see if she falls into the vengeance trap.
Sipping my tea, enjoying reading their despair
I love this chapter, while sitting on my armchair
Frank's going on an adventure, to kick some ass
They'll try to catch him, but they'll only find bodies and casings of brass.
Frank Castle walks the earth as a free man once more.
But how long until he finds his prey?
By the way, did you know that Saint Michael the Archangel is the Saint of both soldiers and healers? He seems like a good choice to represent Frank.
And grocers, Germany, France, Ukraine, the Philippines, and mariners, for some reason.
7747780 my guess is tirek is going to do something that will make twilight break and accept the punisher way in the end
Would be interesting is Twilight throws in the towel and desires to learn from Frank, becoming the pony version of the Punisher...
Umm what? I am pretty sure the elements pick the pony not the other way around. After all, the reason Celestia couldn't purify her own sister is that they were not in full sync with her. She needed new bearers to use them properly. Twilight is the element of friendship/magic. A cheap replacement cannot be made with Starlight. Also, this version of Twilight seems very out of character. She whines all the time about work, she seems very vindictive, and somewhat closed minded.
I still like the story overall. The Punisher is awesome but the above issues bother me.
That's not something Princess Celestia would say. And it's a wonder this prison is "inescapable" what with prisoners being released from their cells, guards being on rotations so predictable that it takes less than a week to figure out the pattern, and anything but hardened veterans of the Royal Guard being hired to keep watch over the most dangerous criminals in Equestria.
I especially have a problem with that last point. Why would a rookie even be considered for such a monumental task as guarding a maximum security prison!? Incompetence all around; everyone should be ashamed. This feels less like idiotic ponies and more like lazy writing, in all honesty. This is still an entertaining read, but the pacing, grammatical errors, and flanderization of characters to the point where the main characters aside from Punisher are so two-dimensional that they are indistinguishable from those who appear in one or two scenes is really dragging the story down.
I'm loving her priorities here. She knows Tirek is a global threat and is nearing his return, but nope, gotta take da hooman down cuz he bad guy.
Doomsday's on the horizon, but you better make friends with that one guy who was important for like a paragraph earlier in the story and now serves no purpose but to be a distraction.
Case in point for why I think these frequent updates are hurting the strength of the story overall in the long run: people have thoughts, but they don't truly think. They address issues and then 180 and do the exact opposite of what is logical. That's worse than them not broaching certain topics at all, because it makes them seem obstinately imbecilic instead of misguidedly mindless. These people have an entire country to worry about, yet they only seem concerned with themselves. This kills immersion.
Well, she kind of just pushes the responsibility on you unless it's five feet from blowing up in her face. She's got more important things to do otherwise. Like eating cake.
I think he's finally starting to realize that a "hero" who stops you from keeping bad guys from harming innocents is no less vile than a villain. Hope he puts a bullet in Twilight next time she tries to impede his mission.
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7748040 Twilight is already proving herself to be rather unstable in this story. If she decides to take up after Punisher, she will be the single most dangerous being outside of Tartarus to exist given her alicorn magic and magical talent. She won't wield an Element of Harmony anymore if she takes a life, but she'll go from being a princess to a force of nature.
True One: Tirek is going to turn into a little bitch and actually ask the Elements to save him, I bet 10.000 bits on that.
They were following the rules, if anything, it's Celestia's fault for not briefing the prison on guidelines for holding such a dangerous criminal. S class? Really? On the levels of Tirek and Sombra? Both of which have magic, and they saw magic as the defining factor of strength. Meaning they were not told about his physical capabilities. Thank you for being so incompetent at holding prisoners Celestia, I'd think if they're so fucking afraid of him, they'd go the whole nine yards of locking him up. But no, he got locked up in daycare with guards that weren't even informed on how dangerous he really is.
This is the kind of anger that just makes me want to twist my nipples because it feel so good!
7748236 I think the updates help the story if they are frequent because it keeps the story flowing and the story gets better over time like in the past stories
7747786 actually it is Fucked Up Beyond All reason
Castle once went up against Blackheart, Marvel equivalent to the son of the Devil, and survived. I'm pretty sure that Tirek is fucked beyond all hopes.
7748768 FUBAR is Fucked Up Beyond All Recognition, not Reason you were close though
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You're both wrong. It's "Repair".
I do agre the love to punish thing isnt something celestia would say she would probably let very clear how dissapointed she was with them. But going after the human isnt wrong they know the human knows where tirek is,so finding the human is the fastest way to find tirek.
7748768 really? Damn...I was close
7749758 I could be wrong someone else said it was what you said
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Those are all valid interpretations of the acronym FUBAR. The one I use is "Fouled Up Beyond All Recognition."
kinda disappointed that luna didn't get her chance
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Or maybe they could've asked him at any time in the four days they had him in jail. But no, Twilight and Celestia are too busy clutching the Idiot Ball for all they're worth.
7747703 Yes. I keep saying that.
I love these moments when layers of the Punisher is explored for us to see that he's not an insane psychopath. He really does about the innocent and wanting to protect them by killing these scum. I can see that his daughter is the epitome of that innocence, translated to the land of cute ponies, is what he wants to protect, no matter what.
I hope Twilight does not make the same mistake as the Daredevil in season two.