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Cobrawolf_Meiji2012


Just a Writer trying to make stories. My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/ClintHoyt and My Ko Fi: https://ko-fi.com/clinthoyt

Comments ( 6 )

That's some bullshit reasoning by Cadance.

But she's a murderous vampire too, so her words can't be trusted anyway. Let's hope somepony cleanses Equestria of all those vamponies.

And then Saitama punched all the Vampires.

The end.

7371022 I was also going to add how Cadence and Twilight became vampires, but I will do that in another story, a prequel to this.

Also This story is the only one that has many low votes.

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Does it?

Well, none of them is mine, I assure you.

Good job but a lot of improvement is required :)

You must improve on your grammar and punctuation. And two-three words were missing a letter. Example~

"I should have known hey would ruin MY vision!"

It's they, isn't it? The same way there are a few words that are in the same condition.

But nevertheless, this story was good. I like the idea ;) Please don't consider me rude or over smart, I'm just trying to help:derpytongue2: You can always do better!:raritywink:

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