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rainbowspirals
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rainbowspirals
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Sorry, I felt I had to downvote your story. You kept switching between past and present tense, which made this really annoying to read. No noticeable spelling errors, which is good, but the plot is ridiculous and everyone is out of character. Since when do ponies have the Internet? Why are all of Twilight's friends in disguise and trying to steal her bread? I've read stories that are weird before, but they're usually funny to make up for the weirdness, and unfortunately this story didn't make me laugh at all. Sorry.
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Um, if you haven't noticed, this is a 'what if' story... Noticing everything else but the important details, are you?
Sorry
7369589 Uhm...if you haven't noticed, there's an "Alternate Universe" tag for a reason, which is mainly used for "what if" stories.
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When i was writing the story, i never realised it was taking place in a completely different world.
Okay sorry.
But this story is firstly under construction, and secondly its in the same universe. I joined four days ago and i dont understand the tags that well yet, so pardon me if i get something wrong.