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I hope the wolf kill Dainn and his caribou Vikings because they freakin' suck!
Thanks for the chapter and a quick question what happened to the sword that ash made when he was in heaven the one that could turn into a human?
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Hingure the Katana?
He still has her
And it wasn't made in Heaven it was made in Limbo
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Where did the sword go because he hasn't been using it
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Noted I’ll work on that
Can we get a chapter where Ash goes after Luna's three other sisters and add them to his herd
A good story, Wolf, but it really needs a good proofreading and grammar/ punctuation check.
It literally otherwise seems to lack details at times, I have to say.
Same with the first, but it won't stop me from reading it!
Nice work as always thou some grammar could use some work and why is it that Ash is have some trouble with these foes? If he’s a god he should be much stronger and faster, as well far more experienced, then them and thus should have an easier time fighting/slaughtering them. But that’s just me
I do hope we will some more action soon like say pushing Dainn’s forces back and out into their old territory. As well maybe see some development with Ash and his family or at least spending time with his girls
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I'm using Grammerly now so I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong.
Also I'll take that under advisement for the following chapters.
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I see
Very well