The sleep song link isn't working

Nice chappie though

7643599 It works fine on my end.

7643599

7643663 might be because i'm on my phone.

7643665 your link isn't put in right, Fawkes. Thanks for trying though

Nice chapter.

Though I gotta ask, why not risk exposure and get help from Earth to fight the Caribou?

You one of my Favorite author on this site i Love your work.
1 Its always long chapters.
2 they are so well writen that i believe im ther.
3 always happens somfing from bickering to sword fights.
4 everypony i like is there.

Keep Being awesom. ;)

Yay more backstory!

7643670 i think its cause your on your phone. it works for me on the chapter and in my comment

7643663 you really are a great writer in my opinion, you do have some major problems with grammar and proper punctuation, I could help if you're ever interested. but one thing that really does bug me is the whole adding music right into the story. I could understand if you threw in music as a sort of background thing, but when you incorporate it into the story itself it can drive away quite a few readers doing more harm than good, whenever I get to a part like that I just try to bite the bullet and read but it makes it very cringy when you do.

7643663 awesome as usual man. I always look forward to your chapters. Hope you can get the next one out a little sooner tho. But that's just me.

Yeah more chapters

7644208 most likely yes

7644335 https://youtu.be/6GTaOtuVpuY you might be able to just follow that link

7644403 i can follow the link but i can't watch the video. Youtube says that the video is not usable.

So i still can't watch it....

I want to hear it!
Why youtube?!? Why!!??!?!?

7644424 search sleep song sleep tribe - topic and its the result with the howling wolf

7644435 i found it, but that is the same one that said the video is not usable

So luck there....

7644452 sorry man, i got nothing else

7644471 it's fine. Maybe i'll find it in some compilation.

Anyways, good night. Clock's 0:01 am. So i need to go and sleep

7644544 jesus man! where the hell do you live, its 5PM here!

This chapter has but is not limited to:
-Good songs
-Awesome backstory
-Character development
-Magic ghost wolf
-SKATEBOARDS

Keep doing what your doing Wolf Blood.

still my favorite author

7644546 i live in Finland. Timezone GMT +2

And you live in America, if i'm not mistaken?

because one I'm not one, of your subject's two,

The comma is after the wrong "one"
Other than that, you seem to absolutely love the word "and".
It's getting a bit excessive.
Try using other words or comma's to separate the different parts of your sentences.
Great story, keep it up!

7645659 yeah, east coast

I'm supposed to believe he plays music through a fucking Ipod all the time?

Cliche.

I don't like you treating me with disrespect in front of my subjects and foals in that manner Bones. So until your attitude improves I forbid you from leaving the castle

Shhhhhhhhh, Celastia he's going through his teenage phase...
In case anyone doesn't know what the fuck I'm referring to...
Its the skate part m'kay

I'm a bit torn about my judgement of the story...Not quite sure what to think yet. I'm not sure if I like the story or not, but I AM interested.

Did Ash make a deal with the devil and his soul was made into Bones?
Is Bones falling in love with Nightmare Moon?
Is the ghost wolf Ash's spirit?
Will Ash be brought back to life?
Is Bones just a sentient catalyst for Ash's rebirth which takes place once the crystal heart it restored with enough power to reconstruct his life?
SOOOOO MANY QUESTIONS!
Pls i needs the next chapter!

7664320
Same
I'm going Pinkie crazy what ing for the next chapter

More please

"Very well Bones but still I recommend trying it, you may be surprised in what you'll find," Faust said before she and Nightmare left.

Faust, are you trying to hoof you newest daughter up with a wraith