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This siege better not have taken ffffooouuurrr hooouuurrrrsss or Joe is going to woop Daybreakers ass, and not in a sexual way. (Don't know how he will, but he's going to find da way)
Also, put some commas in your sentences man. It honestly aggravaes my eyes.
Finally it's here
"magicules" ey? *looks around* where are you hiding the slime?
This place needs better security
Probably
It was good, but when it came to the fighting, the whole waiting for a reaction thing is getting old. As any good warrior knows, it's best to finish a battle as quickly as possible.
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Are we talking bout my Joe or someone else?
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Angry Joe.
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Who?
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From YouTube.
Great chapter and all, and I'm glad you're doing well, but I'm going have to be that unpopular critic right now. You seem to be repeating yourself a bit. We already saw Ash go beserk and rip his foes apart, so no one should be surprised by this. Especially Rage. Plus, Ash told Red that he wanted blood. He can't say that and then feel shame for actions afterward. It would be a different story if Red attacked innocent people. But, that did not happen.
There's also a lot of inconsistencies with Ash's power. Ash fights three gods at once and win, but Daybreaker subdues him? It should not happen to Ash when he has shown better skill and foresight. Where's the power scaling in this? Something like the clop scene should happen to weaker characters. If you have everything happening to Ash, then what about the others? What is Rage, Elisa, Evan doing? Their only purpose now is to gawk at how strong or relentless Ash is, but they know this already.
You need to let your other characters have the spotlight. In the last story, you had side characters join an assassin guild, but now it's like they forgot about that. You had Spike with some cool shadow powers, but what is he doing now? Ash is quickly becoming a Gary-Stu. He's getting all the character growth and development, while everyone else is NPC at this point. I like this story a lot, and I hope what I'm saying is helpful.
After reading the last chapter I have to agree with some of the other people Ash some kind of weak in this chapter he beads 3 gods and win does he not know how to control his powers yet.
Huh a that time i got reincarnated as a slimme reference
Another amazing chapter, and I would be willing to join one of Ash's Tasks Forces to help him take the fight back to Dianne.
We all would.
Dude Awesome chapter. I love this story and really happy to finally read another chapter. Keep up the great work. Hope to see more chapters soon.
I like daybreaker
I'm going to be honest, when I saw the "God King" my first thoughts went to Darius and Garen from LoL, that and FFVII remake...
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Hm hadn't really thought about it personally.
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He didnt feel shame for killing the army and traitor no he felt shame cause he almost killed AJ. Plus Ash beating 3 gods proves gods even himself aren't unbeatable. Its not unlikely for him to lose especially when he is entirely unaware of his surroundings and his opponents powers.
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i meant her telling them why he was being distant
Are you going to finish this story
Holy fuck that was amazing.
Also daybraker I kinda agree with you
I wonder when the next chapter will come out
Ya know I feel kinda like red and daybreaker combined but more or less crazed killer more like uncontrollable rage and hatred
God I can’t wait for the next update
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Oh, I meant nothing bad about what I said, merely that it is the authors duty to convey certain emotions, and you did a great job of conveying anger, anger about a subject with which I hold much anger for. I am not mad at you, I merely hate the race you created.
What’s in the past is in the past, and people have moved on, but it only sparks that vigilante within, who wishes they could’ve done more to help loved ones and more to make those who hurt them suffer greatly. I suppose it also allows me to confront this hatred; these demons, instead of letting it rot within me.
For that, you have my thanks.
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(Sorry for the late replies) I brought it up because to me, I feel like Ash, Rage or maybe Gilda would take Gallus as their brother or son after learning that he was an orphan he hold life and to me he have no parent figure to look up. So I feel like that Ash, Rage or someone that feels the same pain as Gallus would adopt him as their own
It's been awhile since ya released a chapter. Hope one comes soon.
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Cringy comment ngl