First off

And second. You missed an opportunity to tell razor beak his arm wasn't his anymore.
And third. Keep up the good work man.

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His arm?

great chapter

Love the A-Team reference and love your work can't wait to seehow you take care of dainn. Don't be afraid to be creative.

Yeah his arm you know from 300.

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Oh I know the scene you speak of just couldn't remember when Ash sliced off Razor's arm.

That ending though, as always I thoroughly enjoyed the update, can't wait for the next chapter. As a side note I'm a bit surprised to see that flute song used again, you don't tend to repeat any songs from what I've noticed, glad to see it put to use though.

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Well why wouldn't I one you put great work into it plus Zen Aku is by far my most favorite Power Ranger villain and no it's not because he's a wolf in case that's what anyone is thinking.

A-team reference, nice

"You guys should see these bullets in 3D," Pinkie said who had stuck her head out the window and was wearing those 3D glasses again.

"Pinkie get you're butt back in here!" Evan shouted.

"It's like we're actually being shot at!" Pinkie cheered.

I feel like someone has seen the movie "A-Team"

"Rawlin the buttons are confusing me here, which one blows up the plane?" I asked causing the others to laugh.

Someone has definitely seen A-Team

"Wait Ash what the hell are we doing?" Rage asked.

You're gonna fly that tank

"This is awesome!" Evan cheered.

Yes, yes it is

Wow I can't believe it it's been so long since I saw a new chapter for this story I almost thought it was dead but it's great to have it back can't wait for the next one

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My stories shall never die!

Another great chapter for a just as great story from a just as great or greater author

If you keep this up, sooner or later you'll be having yourself a published book or animation out of the stories you create here

can't wait to see more

P.S. I love the A-Team reference

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Oh, ok

Loved the chapter. God that A-team refence though hahahaha

Not to sound pushy, but can you get to the chapter where you get your wings back. Also what are the Alpha Predators based off of?

Alright, the A-Team is going too far. I enjoy your writing and eagerly await each update, but you just put modern military equipment into Equestria with no explanation (except the GUASS is from Halo and is fantasy) to make this bit fit. Please try to keep the time period weaponry appropriate.

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For the record I enjoy your stories of The Monster of Canterlot and A Monstrous family Reunion. (hope to see an update for the latter soon) Now first yes I agree the A-Team scene may have been a bit much but it got a few people to laugh so that's good enough for me. Secondly and with great respect I wish to say that this is my story not yours I should be allowed to put what weapons I want into it regardless of what, or which country they belong to.