Rainbow want's to try something new, a stunt that could get her into the Wonderbolts. The stunts name you ask? The Lightingboom.
This story is due for a rewrite.
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Di-o-S
Start with a mess of words and ideas for a story then clarify so it makes sense.
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Dark..... Such feels.
Just a note on the short description: "try's" is incorrect. "Tries" is correct. In English, it is impossible to conjugate verbs by adding on the apostrophe and the s. The same goes for plural nouns. Adding 's to any word never makes it plural. Just something to watch for.
All "I"s are supposed to be capitilized
There are some spelling errors in this story, such as the letter "I" not capitalized on many occasions. This was still an enjoyable read for me, atleast.
I appreciate the criticism, it helps, thanks and i will correct these when i can.
Not bad but you need an editor.
Not too bad. 6/10 a little bit more decent
4 of the mane 6 + Scoots = 5. Who's the last? A doctor?
7159004 Another mistake, thanks for catching it!
I'll fix it soon
Is it just me, or are all the stories like this not sad at all just because I know it isn't canon?
7199661 I know the feeling. I can write or read sad stories yet no emotions at all. So its not just you its me too.
It would be more sad if you showed more of the after math from a third person perspective or even just scootaloo's