Sky Streak and Midnight find themselves in the middle of a desert, alone. Not knowing how they got there or where they are they traverse the vast expanse in order to find a way home. This proves to be more difficult than anticipated.
NOTE: Story undergoing massive rewrite, the old chapters will still be up, but they are no longer going to be the first chapters. This will be removed once I have made the change, said change will happen at an unmarked date.
It was good, but it indeed could use another chapter to answer some questions left.
Im enjoying this story alot, but im feeling a little confused at times.
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Which parts seemed the most confusing? I can try and clear it up.
7929017 around the parts at the ruins is where you lost me, as well as the location.
7931128 Apologies, that part was a bit rushed. I'll rewrite it clearer, and with more clarity as soon as I'm able. As for the location, Khalil mentions it at the end of the chapter:
The ruins are underneath those mountains. Hopefully, that cleared some things up.
7931210 thx m8