• Member Since 28th Mar, 2016
  • offline last seen Jun 21st, 2020

Di-o-S


Start with a mess of words and ideas for a story then clarify so it makes sense.

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Wat.

Okay then.

That was strangely poetic.

7272303 Thanks for the criticism it helps. The sentence part I find confusing. Are some sentences too complex or is it the overuse of commas or is it something else entirely? I'm still pretty new to writing and would like to know where I went wrong. Also, yeah I miss that tree too.:fluttershyouch:

7274683 I would like that. (sorry I replied so late.)

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