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Lunasservant1985

i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^

Lunasservant1985 Joined 24th Feb, 2015 · Offline

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The Ascendent
The Ascendent #1 · May 5th, 2016 · · · Come Here Often? ·
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Short and sweet. Lovely little one shot.

ARTL
ARTL #2 · May 5th, 2016 · · · Come Here Often? ·
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Pretty good for a rainy day wank. No lie. Three :moustache:'s of five.

Deduct one :moustache: for relative shortness.
Deduct one :moustache: for need of an Editor.

Overall, upvote.

LayTheBlackToRest
LayTheBlackToRest #3 · May 5th, 2016 · · · Come Here Often? ·
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as she took her coffee thermos from her purse

In first sentence and in second paragraph. Might want to get rid of that little bit of repetitiveness :raritywink:

Lunasservant1985
Lunasservant1985 #4 · May 6th, 2016 · · · Come Here Often? ·
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7189710 Ms. Chrysalis sighed heavily as she entered Canterlot High teacher's lounge,


fixed thank you for that

The Ascendent
The Ascendent #10 · May 6th, 2016 · · · Bouns Chapter: An Unexpected Audience....AKA the omitted ending. ·
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7192322
Sex with the staff? Perhaps I should have said minge benefits to instead.

HB_DS2013
HB_DS2013 #12 · Jun 9th, 2016 · · · Come Here Often? ·
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Sombra's voice reminds me of the toaster.

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