Life is going well for Gordon. Two years ago he won the jackpot on the lottery and decided to build his dream home in the Yorkshire countryside. 6 months after moving in, he wakes up one day and realises that either the hills have moved, or he has.
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Okay, it's official. I really despise this version of Celestia. She's being friendly to Gordon now yes, but at every turn she is revealed to be more and more hypocritical. Least Twilight's starting to wisen up... (Also, props to that inspector, I really like him. Guy's got balls of sheer titanium.)
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Next chapter reveals even more history.
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Why do I have a feeling I won't like it and hate Celestia even more after this?
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Can't wait for the next chapter.
waiting intensifies
Ok, now I REALLY want that bitch to be exposed for the hypocritical, over zealous, racist bitch she is, or at least get a serious beat down. I especially want that kiss ass Twilight to get a serious wake up call about her teacher, and loose all faith in her.
Celestia sounds like an utter cunt in this story.
This is not going to end well.
Ya'll know what Gordon's gonna do once he goes to Canterlot
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Seems like in this story Celestia is the true monster, you'd think that something that happened long ago the people would evolve as a culture as well. Although, Equestria is known to be very stagnant in culture, tech, and magic.....
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probably because after seeing how inefficient her own guard were and the way the humans won even after being outnumbered she was scared of their knowledge and efficiency decided to kill the survivors ironically dooming her country should ANYONE ever attack it again since her military sucks so much i mean come on spears, SPEARS
Aw. Why did you end it on such a cliffhanger?
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4/5 needs more explosions
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Well, we all know who to blame for that don't we?
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Understatement of the year there.
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Damn you for the cliffhanger, please, atleast tell me when is the next chapter gonna be?
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Of course she's being friendly, can't risk showing her most faithful student anything too untoward of her, now can she?
OOooooo, I'm going to have so much fun when I kill that Solar b****. I'm going to drag my knife into her flesh and touter her like the Zetas cartel did to there victims.
PS: Love it!
If this does end up on TV Tropes, you can be certain Ron the Death Eater is gonna be on there
and so the more is learned the more time Gordon is having to borrow, because Celestia will find out and will kill him, personally with witnesses and blame him for attacking her. then hell will break loose causing a war.
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Yeah, though at one point I suspect Twilight wouldn't have cared one jot about what Celestia did, times may change now that she's meeting a human personally. (BTW, love your avatar, Kitsunes are some of my favorite mythological animals.)
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Thank you.
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By the way, didn't you make your Celestia similar to this one who unlike this version got raped by a corrupted, racist, human asshole and all of that rage and hatred she developed against humankind manifested into a cold blooded, psychotic, misanthropic, bat-shit insane alter ego who wiped out humanity and probably laughed when she tortured the innocent humans who did nothing to her and she forever has nightmares from the guilt and sins she committed while her other half torments her by reminding her all the fun she did when she murdered the innocent people. Not to mention you currently have a slightly arrogant human in your story which probably triggers Celestia and her alter ego comes out and she won't hesitate to murder him just to ensure mankind ceases to exist.
I honestly get so pissed when I read stories that have racism in it and honestly when Solar Flare is separated from Celestia and is defeated, you either Robert and Sunset kill her, imprison her, or make her see the error of her ways and convince her mankind is not an abomination and no one is perfect no matter what race or species you are. ๐๐พ๐
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We need to invite our good friend Dracula. Mostly because he is good at impaling idiots like sunbutt in this story.
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Yeah, I was half-wondering if someone would bring Solar Flare from Wild Access up. Look on the bright side, at least that version of Celestia is a split personality case, not pure evil. (And slightly arrogant? Think that's a bit of an understatement really on Robert's character.) Not spoiling what happens to her though, as it's one of the major things I'm building up to. I will let you know that it's going to be a show however when it finally comes to a head.
This cliffhanger was mean....so mean....One of those cliffhangers that makes you throw yourself at the screen in frustration, screaming "NOOOOOOO" and then rapidly hitting refresh and hoping you've just missed the notification that said there was actually 2 chapter updates and not just one.
Good chapter man my only problem is THAT MOTHER FBEEEEEEEEEEEEEP GOD DBEEEEEEEEEEP CLIFFHANGER sigh please my friend make the next chapter soon I don't know if my heart can wait
That really risses me off I and can't wait for him to get back to canterlot and go Apeshit on her.
(thinks back)
...Have Celestia hear this song. I don't care how.
Edit: or this awesome cover of it.
It's probably along the lines of having someone else loved other then herself ...... look what happened to luna when she complained she got banished can't have a buncha non ponies be more popular then her so she got rid of the problem. It'll be interesting to see what happens when celestias lie gets exposed to twilight and she finds out how celestia committed genocide the look on her face when twilight rejects her will be priceless.
Judging by comments, it seems that not only are livid/pissed off by what this Celestia did.........Tying herand throwing her into swarm of Changeling seems now like a pretty good idea. I secretly hope that:
A. Not all humans were murdered and with the help of others races built hideaway/country to return one day...to get justice.
B. Other humans appeared, and with the help of other races they hid for ponies to return one day...to get justice.
C.Both A and B added into one (Many people, both civilians and soldiers,and even whole ship and armies have disappeared through ages, after Crusades)
And if over that time they develop their technology
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"Welcome everypony , we are back"
and so Celestia will get quick reality check
As for Twilight,I understand that she don't trust Gordon's opinion about Celestia but.....God, can't she see that these ponies who are not misanthropes have a similar opinions....... and between lines (from both conversations and information) it seems that resta of races and countries think alike....so yae....Wake up Twilight
Something tells me Gordon will hate celestia even more next chap
I figured Celestia was behind the killing of the humans 800 years ago when she told him they died of an unknown illiness and Gordon named it radiation poising.
This chapter conformed what I thought, she used the power of the sun to bring illness to he humans even they did save pony kind. As the saying goes. History written by the victor...
I look forward to the next chapter and so far I enjoyed reading this story. It taken me two days to read all this. ^^
I have a bad feeling these humans died because they refused to name this celestia their g-o-d.
So not only did Celestia lied to Gordon's face in terms of how many humans were alive back 800 years ago.
But she slaughtered a species that was already weakened due to the war and SAVED her country from changelings due to her ineptitude of ruling?
Gordon is going to go full berserk mode when he sees Celestia next time.
MV Ulysses is a nice ship, but its a pity Gordon didnt get to ride the bootleg turn that the MV Isle of Innishfree did coming into Hollyhead in order to hot land at the dock.
Trottingham is not only the city of The Lost, but The Denied and even worse, The Erased?
Celestias burnt so many history books, Gordons going to have to create GCU Grey Area. ๐
Good story and all m8, but please, identify speaking parts. You can't have a scene with multiple people present and not identify every line of text. It can get a bit confusing figuring out who exactly is talking.
Just can't wait long enough for Celestia to die, and Twilight and the rest of Equestria to get their comeuppance.
Would it be too much to ask for an Australian military reference to make it in?
Maybe to tie to how the Ode was there before the Crusaders.
I'd like to see either a Slouch Hat or the Rising Sun which was worn on it.
Getting interesting so far.
But why was clop skipped?
Damn wonder when the next chapter will come out
If I had a reason to hate Celestia even more than I already do in this chapter, now would be the perfect time to consider this chick a racist bitch who didn't give a damn of who she crushed.
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When are you going to continue your stories, including The Alpha Male? I really like that story๐
I really hope Gordon never forgives Celestia completely. That, and sets Twilight straight.
It kills me when my favourite pone lives in such a deep ignorance.
when will the next chapter come out
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I have 3k words so far. The wait won't be as long as before.
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the souls of the afterlife are pleased and bless you young one
Seems she's no better than the humans that she's accused of being evil. It really puts into perspective how many other things she's possibly lied about and covered up with propaganda.
Nightmare Moon?
Discord?
Sombra, perhaps?
I wonder what's going to be Luna's takeaway from these truths...
AtomicCrusader23:DEUS VULT!!! FOR HONOR!!!
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Agree! "gnashes teeth in bloodthirsty fury"