Life is going well for Gordon. Two years ago he won the jackpot on the lottery and decided to build his dream home in the Yorkshire countryside. 6 months after moving in, he wakes up one day and realises that either the hills have moved, or he has.
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cant wait for the next chapter. Twilight has opened a fresh can of CostCo sized whoop ass
Forward! The New Lunar Republic!
OOoooh i loved this chapter. And i like your take on Blueblood. Cant wait to see what happens next
Great chapter. Hopefully, Gordan can pull through.
Well... bugger.
Next chapter plz
"PUUUUNCH THAT PRINCESS IN THE FACE... LIKE A BOSS!"
Great now we wait for another month it is not fair this one was too short
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i know right how could he just leave it like this
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Fight me you cum coloured whorse!
*sniff* Celly smells like fck-ton of hypocrisy, several gallons of abuse-of-power, and few pint's of racism, with several "Blind-guard's"... Give or take a few. And now she has no "lapdog-student" to help her... Let's see how she TRIES to dig herself out of this and reason her worse-than-human behavior...
Also, nice to see another good Blueblood. Got hunch of such earlier, due to his name and that there is apparently pro-human pony with access to secret things in Canterlot...
Keep it up
this chapter was awesome!! please more
sad to say, this chapter's finally killed my interest in this story. it's good for what you're trying to make it, but it's not for me.
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Jacksepticeye
Dang it. Another cliffhanger, another month.
TKO!!!!!!
this is a pretty neat story.
Karma senses tingleing
Really Celestia ? She have no idea what happen Gordon almost kill in the dungeons . When Twilight see teacher like this , of course she begin start to hate Celestia now .
FINALLY TWILIGHT DID IT YOU SUN OF A BITCH ! Hurry bring it new thrones for her .😎
I will become a donator when you write more than just one chapter a month the story is good and all but you take too long to write just one chapter and sometimes they are a little bit short I like the story I understand if you are busy with life but if you take too long to write other chapters you might want to put at least I know this thing you'll be gone for a little while but beyond that I understand where this is going and I like it is great.
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Sun of a...
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Shit boutta go down
POW! ROGHT IN THE KISSER.
GET DECKED YA FALSE SUN GODDESS!!!
You are a disgrace to all Celestias in the multiverse and I hope you get what's coming to ya bitch!!🖕😡
Oh Celestia will be PISSED
Oooo that last line hehe nice.It felt good reading that it really did! Keep up the good work!
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High-fives all 'round! wha-pssh wha-pssh wha-pssh
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Glad someone stepped up, let alone her own former student.
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I know right he just leave it off of punching Celestia in the face it's just so cruel I mean don't worry I get it the guy's got his own life to worry about he's got work and other things like that with a story this good it just seems so mean
you better have another chapter ready for us before another month passes.
Please tell me Celestia is going to get her comeuppance next chapter? I can't wait!
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Preach, brotha!
My god, Celestia and her guards just get worse with each chapter!? At least one of them(and amazing Blueblood) has sense of morality. Oh I SO hope she and her crimes and lies about humans gets exposed to ALL of Equestria, and ever subject turns on her like the bigot bitch she is.
i m so happy about how you decided to portray Blueblood i don't think it's fair how he's betrayed and most fanfiction after his appearance in the grand galloping gala which i don't believe was his true self and when you think about it is exactly what rarity deserved
Some how, this reminds me of Mexico y Colombia. Bad days for me, at least I took care of it in the endshhhhhhhhh
Never piss off Twilight...especially to the point where she resorts to PHYSICAL violence.
EDIT: Blueblood isn't a Jackass? I like it.
Please don't make us wait months again, I'm begging you!
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The next chapter's already finished, my proof-reader/collaborator is going through it. I've already started on the 17th chapter.
So not only is Celestia willingly holding back her ponies from advancing and getting better with the aid of science and technology, but she is willingly allowing her guards to pretty much commit heinous crimes in her name and look the other way. I sure hope she gets stripped of her royalty ranking and title, have her horn removed and her wings clipped.
And also I hope i don't have to wait another month or two for another chapter
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF THE NIGHT KICK SUN BITCHES FACE IN. Also more chapters please😁
this chapter felt weird to me, the beginning felt somewhat rushed and some characters acting off at different times throughout the story
But so far its still a nice read
please i beg of you i want to see gordon punching sunbutt repeatedly over her so precious ponies i want him to kill everyone who wronged him plz oh plz let him release his inner rage
Damn, Twilight was awesome here and it's nice seeing Blueblood not be a jerk....heck he probably just got Gordan and the Elements as serious friends.
Revolution is coming!
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Because we all know what happens when that rage is held in
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everybody dies a horrible painful death
did i get it right?
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Yes