Life is going well for Gordon. Two years ago he won the jackpot on the lottery and decided to build his dream home in the Yorkshire countryside. 6 months after moving in, he wakes up one day and realises that either the hills have moved, or he has.
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Oh, boy...
well then.
Bloody hell. I've seen some really messed up stuff in books before, but you have certainly taken the cake with this story. Every time I think I've seen the end of this train wreck, something new and even worse comes in to fk up my day. Well done, you have certainly made this story interesting, if at times hard to read. I look forward to the next chapter like a car crash piling up in foggy weather, but don't let me stop you from swinging full force. Sometimes the best redemptions and triumphs come from the worst settings and situations, so here's to hoping things start to look up for our hero sooner than later.
Also, first comment on the new chapter. Yay me.
See you next chapter,
Shadow Quill, Messenger of the Moon.
Well, when you fuck up, you really fuck up :3
About time a new chapter to this most epic story comes out, please don't take so long on the next one if it is possibly.
I remember a case file that my father was solveing during the time he was a cop in mexico. I can’t remember the name of the file but it something very similar to what happened to those died ponies and humans in the dungeon (with out the brazen bull thou, it was with a large oven in a factory)
oh my god can Celestia be anymore of a bitch??
Well then....
...We are going to need alot of tea, cake and a small army of therapist's and a army of psychologist's to make a break through
Dammit Celestia
If Celestia had a human as a lover, then what the heck happened that made her see all humans as vile, evil creatures?
...Um, okay then. Right...
Sorry folks, I had to do it.
So has Celestia been taking out her failures and short comings on our protagonist? That might actually make sense, from the way the writer has portrayed her she seems rather unstable. While this could be explained by her bias, but purhaps humans are her scapegoat.
Now that one has arrived she simply acted how she usually handled things, discredit it, then burry it so she didn’t have to deal with. But now that’s not an option, questions will be asked and I could very well end badly for her and all who are involved. And it will be all her fault...
........I have no words.
Are we getting a flashback chapter or two?
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Possibly. I'm also considering a full side story telling the story of the Crusader humans arrival and the subsequent events (including the battle with the Changelings).
jesus Christ. what happen to the past? and why? also she have lover one?
Well, I’m sure there’s a complex story behind the illogical reason for Celestia’s bigot hatred for humans, when her past lover was an innocent human.
Interesting development... Wonder what Griffins do later on, and what is Sunbutt's story about his human lover? And does said lover perhaps have something to do with Blueblood's full name...
This train wreak still has cars crashing, and it’s on fire.
N-nani the fuck?
Didn't expect that.
I wanted to ask, is Gordon's name pronounced with a G sound or a J sound?
Cuz I had a friend named Gordon but it was pronounced with a J
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With a G.
i got the feeling that something like a lover was the case with that photo celestia was crying over
but i didn't think i would be right
This ain't Celestia. this is Tyrantlestia. So, kills her lover/husband in brazen bull, for "revenge", forgets his remains for eight centuries, sanitizes historical records, and in current time holds back scientifical progress just so she could still rule. Man, I hope griffons get pissed off ballistically enough for war, so they show Tyrant what happens when you equip your troops with golden armor, swords and spears. I forsee a lots of dead unicors from White Deaths, and pegasi being introduced to the concept of Meat Choppers by griffins.
The secrets of the past are coming to light.
FUCKING TOOK LONG ENOUGH!!!!! i mean come on man what took so long?
Still not okay with how Celestia has been handling things, but enjoy that we're seeing her emotions and history more fleshed out.
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Thanks man, amazing story by the way
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Thank you.
I wonder if there's a griffin called Gresley...or better yet Nigel.
Fuckin knew it was her having her heart broken. Well boo hoo! Doesnt excuse genocide. Wonder if Gordon will say she doesnt know human cruelty, explaining the nazis, and understanding that everyone is capable of great evil, and great good
WAIT! Didn't cleastia say in a few chapter's that he remind her of someone is their going to be a reveal that that human in the picture is his ancestor
And also that grffian knows something about him
The comment by Eagle-1 remind me of gordon's prediction of a coming war. And i thought to put out an idea i had a while back from it. What if the cause of this war or a part of it is trottingham trying to succeed from equestria. Because of how poorly there treated by the rest of equestria and how different their culture is. Sense trottingham is heavily influenced by england it would almost be like the american revolution in reverse.
If your confused or like “what the fuck does that mean" the chapter name is
you should not make evil in order that good may be made from it
man I love can't wait for more!
“Understanding is a three edged sword: your side, their side, and the truth.”
― J. Michael Straczynski
While is undeniably true that history is written by the victors, history is not black or white and there allot of shades of grey. All of Celestia’s past mistakes have come back to haunt her and this time there no way she can hid it this time, it only matter of time before rumors start to spread across and becomes impossible for her to hid the truth. No matter how much you try to bury the truth is will come out, maybe not today, it may take hundred or a thousand years, the truth will come out.
Celestia and her cronies have succeeded in almost twisting history, but Griffins remember the humans, did not forget.
And it look like Celestia’s dirty little secrets will be soon reviled to the world and things will chance.
Ponies of Equestria! the day of reckoning is coming.
The way I see it: the Ponies of Equestria will never grow beyond their racism and bigotry against humans and other races so long as they believe that they are end-all be-all race of their world!
They literally believe their race is the center of their world/universe and better than any other race in their world.
After all the Sun and the Moon are under the control of their princess, which are basically have all physical traits of the three tribes. Having the Strength of a Earth Pony, the Wings of a Pegasus, the Horn of a Unicorn and ridiculous long “immortal” lives.
So long as Celestia and Luna keep up this illusion that they are gods and control the heavens the ponies keep believing that they are better than all other races and their divine right to rule over the world.
Their perfect world little and racist ideas need to be torn down if the Ponies want to move forward and not being stuck with a semi-medieval mindset.
It is going to be painful. Maybe some ponies will die. But it will be better in the long run.
Oh this is getting extremely deep now and it’s going to be quite the heavy shocker for all now.
Sooooo... Bad stuff happens, Celestia snaps, screws up, and has her human lover mercilessly tortured to death. Fine. I can buy that.
Then, after killing him in a torture decide.. She just leaves his remains there? for eight centuries? Really? Well, on the plus side, I guess that means she didn't have any use for the torture chamber anymore...
But wait, it gets dumber! The guards found a skull! And, apparently, ONLY a skull. So, what exactly happened to the 205 or so bones in the human body? Did some really incompetent maids come clean the place up a few centuries ago, and 'miss' that piece or something?
Seriously, where's the rest of this poor guy?
Is that a correct sentence?
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no
remove
them
Pointing
replied
‘‘gives a shit about’’ ?
pain's/pain is
‘his neutral face’’ ?
self-centered
to
‘‘of the parliament’’ ?
Should that be ‘‘any longer’’ ?
too
‘‘seeing it’’
When is the update coming out
He know about him i think the person in the photo is his ansester or somthing because gresley remind celestia of someone as mentioned in a fee other chapter so it is possible that the human in the photo is his ansester or somthing
Whens the update coming up
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I'm currently writing it but it won't be for a while yet (my proofreader/collaborator needs to go through it also).
Ok then thanks