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This story is a sequel to Change is Good


Over a decade after the events of the main series, Chrysalis and the Changelings have assimilated into Equestrian society and found their niche. Chrysalis has even got married! Now Luna has found a husband of her own, and such an event is a great opportunity for many with less than savoury intentions, and many a plot will come to fruition.

A sequel to Change Is Good by Ocalhoun, for his Big 250K Contest

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That was awesome. And I didn't really see any errors.

You had me going all the way through, the reveal was great and everything makes sense. Who would be better at espionage? And i always loved favourable interpretations of Blueblood.

All in all, great story, faving and following.

Circles within circles.

Haha, well done! Chrysalis and her husband are an odd pairing with a clever interpretation. :rainbowlaugh:

Faved, easily. :twilightsmile:

At first this idea had me groaning and rolling my eyes at the direction it was going. And then I feared it would digress into a pointless description of how things in Equestria become after a decade or two. But after a while, I couldn't help but get into it. While I think it could have done a better job of providing the backstory that's missing between the original and this, I can see why it was omitted -- a lot of the suspense and surprise come from there. And the plot twists! They're dizzying without being overbearing. Nicely done. This one really does live up to the 'thriller' tag. I only wish it could have been perhaps longer and more in-depth. Perhaps spending more time showing the relationships between ponies, rather than telling, since I did have a hard time keeping track of that. Who's married to whom, and so forth.

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I wish this had more to do with the story it's supposed to be a sequel to. It was kind of fun in its own way, just very different and a little hard to follow.

Block #6 · Oct 1st, 2020 · · 1 ·

“Maybe. I’m pony enough to make you wait until breakfast for a full explanation to enjoy your suspense. And to carefully time my account to Celestia’s mouthfuls of tea.”

:rainbowlaugh:

Nice little fic that swerved and twisted just right to keep everything up in the air about what was going on in the best ways.

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