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ShadowSteed


I Am ShadowSteed! I Hope To Read Your Fanfics & Even Write One Of My Own! ^ _ ^

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The Cutie mark crusaders believe they have tried everything to earn their cutie marks. When they go around asking for ideas, all they hear is "be patient." They get furious and frustrated with hearing those two words & decide to silence those who told it to them... Permanently!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 22 )

okay so where to start. Applejack would say sugarcube not partner i would expect that from big mac if any pony. applebloom is more talkative and energetic why didnt she talk. and finnaly WTB that was bucked up dude scootallo just snaps and goes bulistic hulk on diamond tiara damn good story ill read more later i have a long list of fics to read:pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp:

I have already told told you what i think of it but sill. good story:moustache:

::twilightoops::derpyderp2::pinkiegasp:............................................................................................................................................................HOLEY SHIT"faints"

*reads story* Not that bad, just some minor gramatical errors and-

*get to the psycho-Scoots part*

...what the hell did I just read. :rainbowhuh:

Congratulations. A fanfic that was actually pleasing. Wait, this was your first try? Seriously? Holly crap you deserve an award. I tip my hat to you sir. (Or madam)

:scootangel::scootangel::scootangel:
Turns Into-
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

POOR SCOOTALOO WITH HER MENTALLY UNSTABLE MIND:applecry:!

thats what you get dimond tiarra :rainbowwild:!
This Kind Of Reminds Me Of Tiny Wings (Another Fanfic :yay:) Because Of How Emotional Scootaloo Becomes.
Great Details And I Simply :heart: The Varity Of Verbs You Use :raritystarry:! Awsome Job :rainbowdetermined2:!

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Twi......:twilightsmile:

AJ...........:ajsmug:

Who's Next?

Rainbow?............:rainbowkiss:

Rarity?............:raritystarry:

God, i don't know if i can take anymore :pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

such..... intense.......details.......
I thought it wouldn't get worse then scoots, but this........:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:
I think i'm going to be sick:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

788517 Wow. Lucky guess. ^ _ ^

805570 Thx, but now...... I think it just might be zecora!:pinkiegasp:

811251 Maybe, maybe not. Stay tuned. ;)

What are you foals talking about? This fanfic is great......

811257 I am tuned in, just dont take too long!:fluttershysad:

816047 Next chapter will be written tonight. ^ _ ^

816375YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

"Oh no! Oh nononononon! Ohnonononon!" You should take those n's of the ending of those. And good job, I no idea why I'm enjoying this story :pinkiehappy:

I'm loving demonic Sweetie Belle! Keep up the great job! :twilightsmile:

FIRST!! [Sorry, I just HAD to do that]

Anyways, this story is continuing to be amazing! Can't wait to see how this all ends! Keep up the amazing work, mate :derpytongue2:

yes,give into the darkness!you shall make a fine champion of chaos!

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