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GiantFunnyShark


I'm going back to the ocean, dry land is doomed.

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Every-pony loves the princess of Friendship. Since her arrival in Ponyville, all the ponies have taken to her unique personality. However no-pony knows, not even Spike, what Twilight does behind the doors of the basement.

If you want to find out, well I must tell you that what you're about to see cannot be unseen.

You have been warned!
Just kidding! While there are some serious elements in the story, it's just for fun. Enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

I just wish ponies could just understand me.

Dr. Cannibalestia prescribes 20ccs of talk about it with them.

We haven’t shared a nice warm cup in a while

Wait, weren't you just having tea at sugar cube corner?

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That would probably help but that would make a very short story.

Also, I meant that they haven't shared a cup of tea on their own in a while.

Lol...was a nice little read

6 friends sit in a booth

Learn how to count.

Ok, that was a very fun twist, and an interesting overall read. At first, it trundles along, leaving me wondering what was going on, then Twilight gets back to her castle and The Reveal hits. Puts the whole thing in a different light that is a little overworked, but remained quite entertaining.

The long paragraphs are a little rough. Such walls of text. Maybe edit it to make it a little easier on the eyes.

LOVE THIS I GIVE IT EXCITED PINKIE (really really good) :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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