Chaotic Harmony

by shirotora

Release aleart

To those of you who enjoyed the preview, Into the Black: A Mare's Tale is up and can be found here

Comments

[moltendaniel]

well, i just started this story at 10:30 this morning. just finished it at 10:30 this evening. it would have been finished sooner if it werent for my mums boyfriends birthday being today and him getting a puppy and me constantly playing with it. i have to say its a very good story. i love it and this is going to be one of the fanfics i repeatedly re-read with some of my other favs. i really would like a sequal though, preferably to the happy ending where shiro's alive. you could make it a short one where he goes on a massive quest to somehow bring celestia back but doesnt tell anyone about it, then have a skip to the future where he and celestia teleport in and say hi like nothing happened and then do a retelling of what he and her went through to return. kinda like your new fanfic with twilight disapearring for a year...or was it 3 months.

anyway good story. 10/10 would bang would read again

[shirotora]

1792694 Thanks

1793038 YOL TOOR SHUL is the full fire breath shout from Skyrim

1793442 Not bad... Creepy, but not bad

[shirotora]

1824144 Some people can't appreciate this type of ridiculous, over-the-top kind of action.

[markoatonc]

I just finished reading. I started reading "into the black" and then notice much greater story, this one. Than you for writing this, it was awesome. At the end I only missed something with Shiro demending on Twilight stopping changeling hunting ant at least trying to create some diplomacy with them. but story is like 15/10.

I just realized something. look at kids we have there:
(when we take all known foals in story and that all of the couples had at least one)
-changelling (at least we can hope that this time her real mother has gone "further", because last time she landed in tartarus by mistake)
-dragony "pro" (¾ dragon and ¼ pony )
-2x dragony (½-½)
-2x tigony
-druid
-alicorn
-dhampir (with ekstra strong daddy. Who by the way was Big Mac? Apllejack was that fast because of being half vampire, but what about him?)
-****** (I do not remember with who was Rarity but it looks she is only one from all of them who had normal love)

PS. sorry for any mistakes or grammar errors. I am not from English speaking country.

[sycotic]

just found this because of your new one that got featured and after reading i am now the epitome of happy face
thanks for this and yes i realize i'm "behind" but had to let you know this was one of my favorite reads on fimfiction

oh and merry Christmas

[Mr Sarcasm]

How do you do it? write soooooooooooooooooo many good, great, awesome Bucking Fantastic chapters???
i clicked on this by story by accident and got addicted you sir Shirotora deserve fourteen Moustache's, ive gotta say i am most pleased with your work.

too bad this is near to the last chapter
oh well, ive got some moar reading to do

[light snow]

Gonna try it after this.