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MetalBrony823
A brony that loves Heavy Metal, Africa, Rock, and Animals. Not to mention Ponies too. Fluttershy is best pony! \m/
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I didn't read the original, but I didn't much like this (based on the first chapter alone).
The concept is good enough, but the clop is terrible. What little description there is, is inconsistent in style and low in quality.
Please continue ^^. And I know that he is young. But could you plz let him sound older. That "pee pee" kinda ruins all the mood in that story.
Nice start, Rumble.
Waiting forever for this woohoo! And please let rumble sound older
So Thunderlane is with Blossomforth?
6896583 That Is a possibility.
He didn't just promised, he Pinkie Promised!!
Maybe after this story, you should do one about Spike and DL Ember.
i like it
You kept calling rumble pip in this chapter
I've been thinking......
7620753 About what?
7620916 This is a big what if but.....
What if Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon somewhat falls for Ponyville's favorite dragon?
7621798 that could also be arranged someday.
7622047 Just take it under consideration.
7622051 I will
One problem with this chapter i think Arnold (or the terminator) is austrian (austria) not German
is Rumble going to get her pregnant.
Nice work I like the story little fast but good.
8047881 That, I am unsure of
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Better change that word before its too late.
yes.
That sounds disgusting, "a la mode" means "topped with ice cream"
Yes