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Magatsu Orpheus


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Rarity and Applejack.

Applejack and Rarity.

Not two ponies anyone would have expected to get together. And certainly nobody would expect them to stay together. But, when is love ever what you expect?


A shipfic taking place over the course of a year and a half, with a chapter for every month. Chapters are standalone (unless otherwise noted) and may be published out of order.


Cover art by White Diamonds.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 19 )

Aww. This is sweet. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. :twilightsmile:

I hope to see them talking about them having foals!

Magatsu Orpheus where is the next chapter for this story

I WILL READ THIS AND LIKELY APPROVE
I RARELY READ
I NEVER APPROVE
LET US SEE IF YOU CAN POP MY CHERRY

6669450
I'd say "should be done tomorrow", but tomorrow's Thanksgiving, so I won't be working on this, and it'll probably be Friday night or Saturday morning instead.

Also, just wanna say for the record, since I edited this into the description after submission (forgot to do it before it was published), chapters for this fic are standalone, and will be written and posted out of order.

6669786
Look, I love a "Big NO!" as much as the next guy, but some elaboration would be nice.

6669899
Oh okay
It was super dry and practically emotionless. There should be some level of "learning" even in the first chapter - that and I'm not sure I got much of a hold on anyone's personalities. How do they each respond to each others' specific actions? Take us step-by-step, motherfucker, and crank the adorable up to at least 6 or I'll stab myself

6669909
...Sounds about right, yeah.

It does seem rather dry, and "emotionless" is generous.

I'll keep your criticisms in mind while writing the other chapters, and I think I might come back to rewrite this one after the rest is finished.

6670070
why are you so okay with that



dammit I suck at taking criticism

Now I Wanna See How This Turns Out.:raritystarry: But Also, If The Stories Are Set A Month After, How Will The "Next Week" Thing Work Out?

6671120
Yeah, I probably should have put the day of the month this takes place on. I'll edit that in now.

Comment posted by Magatsu Orpheus deleted Nov 28th, 2015
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