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HyperBlossom7


Your friendly neighborhood disaster lesbian at your service. I write pony words and squee over my ships.

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This story takes place after the episode 'Secret of My Excess.' The greed in Spike's heart is still there, and eventually it takes over him. A few days later, Twilight Sparkle wakes up to find that Spike has missing. It turns out later that day that Rarity is also missing. After investigating, the mane six find out that Rarity and Spike were last seen going into the Everfree forest.

Twilight goes into the forest to save the two, and Applejack tags along because she is more worried about Rarity. However, what they discover is not what they had expected.

AN: This is my first Rarijack fanfiction, and there's Sparity in there too. I suppose you could say this was my first actual adventure story involving My Little Pony too. Anyway, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, and I do hope you all enjoy it!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

So wow. Just wow. Beautiful story so far. I would like to read more of this.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry: Although I have to ask, is this story going to contain any mature adult stuff? :rainbowhuh:

3777365 Glad you like it :pinkiehappy:

As for mature adult stuff, there will be some blood and gore, but nothing too sexual.

Hope you can finish it soon.

Wow. This is awesome! You can really feel the 'dark' this story gives off as you read it. It feels empty, but it it's not... I like it. :twilightsmile:

Welp, there's another story I can throw onto the Read Later pile.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
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What's up with all the dislikes, though? :fluttershysad:

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Im so sorry for the long wait. I am working on the second chapter, I'm just so busy with personal life and also I keep getting new ideas for stories. I can't say when exactly I will finish the second chapter, but when I do I will let you all know. Again Im sorry for the long wait. Good fanfics take time.

The best ship mixed with the worst ship? Th' fuck?

3905792 Oh don't worry I'm aiming for RariJack completely. I've long since abandoned Sparity.

3905793 What makes you think I was referring to Sparity as worst ship? Sparity is my top ship and RariJack my most hated. :rainbowhuh:
W-well, anyways...

3905796 Idk...thanks for commenting anyway I guess.

3905798 Ehn. No comment is a bad comment in my eyes. Maybe I'll give a read anyways since Spike is my top fav.

Please leave comments because thats the best part about writing stories because it lets me know people are actually reading them and enjoying them. Thanks

Can't wait for more chapters

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