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i want to know where celestia and luna stand in this is twi the Faithfull student to any of em
This story is complete shit. But lulzworthiliy shit. Like... JOHN CENA!!!!!!!!!
YOU JUST NOT SUPER SLAMMED!!!!
Interesting premise but you gotta wring out these chapters dude. Like really triple check them for any mistakes before you even send it to your editors/proof readers. A little more time and energy and you got a good story.
And fix the title and description, cause people do get turned off by the whole "no capitalization" in the description, mainly because the description should reflect what's to come quality wise before diving into the chapters.
That story description is a mess.
So... is English not your native language? Or is it just that you don't give a damn about writing properly?
How very interesting....
to clarify a few things
Luna and celestial are not going to appear in anyway in this story if they mention it will praise the moon or something like that
not every pony is a vampony or were , or witch,
in essences about one third of the population is supernatural
i intend right more and for this be a learning curb for myself.
Darkness
You need to capitalize your i's so that they look like I's.
Edits will come soon as well new chapters.
Will we find out what Spike did that got him banished?
7874288 yes that will come to light.
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is this story dead/canceled?
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No still working on it. Too many ideos . I am working of my grammar and storytelling. Thank you for the favorite .
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no prob, also if you have so many ideas why not make Something like another post/story that's used for voting what people whant the next chapter to be, it'll give you a chance to get your ideas out and allow a bit of interaction with your fans.
PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO SPIKE!!!!!!
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Trust me i have nothing but ideos and ambition. The problem is have lot of trouble figuring what to put down before change again. Lol .
Please continue this story!
Would you like to borrow an OC?