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“You’re going to write something for me, on all the boards.” thats fucking stupid
That's a bit ridiculous of Cheerilee. But otherwise a good chapter.
Welcome to Terra! A planet that makes the Everfree Forest look tame in comparison! I'd love that to get around; it'd be like if we met an alien that lived on Venus. "Holy carp, you live in THAT kind of place?"
Nice work. Hope to see more soon.
7833598 It was just a bit of comedy after all that's one of the things about the story. I know it's silly but I just wanted to throw in some fun there at the end.
This is Earth, Humanities home planet.
The planet itself could be said to be a living breathing thing that has major psychotic issues as it is ALWAYS trying to kill everyone and evrything.
You think the Everfree is bad? Try walking though a park, you'll be begging to be dropped in the middle of the Everfree by the end of the day.Blasted bees.
I see what you did there. Surprised you referenced that episode though.
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Hahaha if he doesn't stop cussing he's going to need one of theses.
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Great story
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What episode?
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He was referencing Star Trek: Next Generation episode 'Shades of Gray'.
7833719 Actually that didn't enter my mind at all, I was just trying to think of all the messed up stuff I'd seen in No Man's Sky and other stuff that TNG episode totally slipped my mind lol.
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Or Little Lulu's solution... write lines using the chalk-holder meant for quickly drawing musical staves on the board.
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Well congratulations on the accidental reference to the infamous clipshow episode.
Out of curiosity, was the polarized hull also an accidental reference? =
7833784 Now that was from Enterprise, I wanted something that would make sense without shield technology and that seemed like the perfect thing to go for.
7833780 I think I saw that done in the Simpsons' as well with Nelson telling Lisa to do it that way. Unfortunately that wouldn't work in this case with the teacher right there.
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Good call.
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Now that you mention it, I think I remember that episode too.
7833638 thanks for THAT mental picture of cheerilee by the way
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Read a Naruto fic where nobody knew he could use clones, so he covered every single surface in the classroom with it. EVERY surface. Every wall, ceiling, floor, desk, every page of every single book, the insides of drawers and cabinets, tinily on every single writing implement... you get the idea. And then they made him clean it up, but since all the markers were clones, it took all of a second.
7834784 mind linking the fic if you can? I'm curious.
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It's here. Mobile link because I'm on my phone.
great chapter! well worth the wait!twilights and cheerilee reactions were priceless!you really portrayed them beautifully!
It's alive. IT'S ALIVE!!!!
And AWESOME!!!!!!!!
7841154 I was going with the information from the book of the two sisters which said that both Luna and Celestia were born as alicorns later found alone by Starswirl. Unfortunately with the show, that book and I think the comics all giving different histories the canon of their pasts has become very murky at the moment. Until in the show they outright give a decent background to them it's all just kind of fan speculation at this point.
I know that they said 'the birth of an alicorn was something Equestria has never seen' in that episode with Flurry but remember that Luna and Celestia were born BEFORE Equestria was founded and so you could say that after them no other natural ones were born. Since both Twilight and Cadence are supposed to be given normal life spans it's the only reason why both Luna and Celestia have such long lives if they were natural born which might make Flurry also have the same type of long life as them. At least that's my theory and so what's going on with this story.
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Fair enough. I haven't read the book, so I thought that they were born after the founding. Shows that I know.
Explore the universe, meat strange new lifeforms, teach the kids new and intresting curse words.
Get called out on it.
Well gotta admit, Cheerilee is the master of her classroom taking no crap from anyone.
The image of book burning only getting an eye twitch from Twi there and the 'ancient technique' of the wet willy was a riot. That's when you know you've really broken her. I can totally see Spike making use of that at some point next time she goes off the deep end.
7833638 Another great chapter--been loving this story!
Wonder if Twilight is going to try and visit the Great Library and open an Equestrian wing? Daring Do becomes the next big kiddie book once humans learn about ponies as a whole.
Definitely happy I read it. There's a few minor continuity errors, though. The one that jumped out at me the most was when David thought "again" about the oddly common medical symbols that ponies and humans first used. He wasn't the one who noticed that before; that was Twilight, when she saw them in the med bay of his ship.
very cute. like the first reviewer says, "Miss Cherilee doesn't take crap from
anyone (pony) well done indeed and I look forward to more.
7841174 Is the next update almost ready?
7915062 Sorry barely even started, so much to do plus I was playing Rust a lot and that takes a lot of time lately.
7938256 too late someone made a better joke about red bull making alicons lol.
This has been a hilarious read. One of the best in the genre that I have been able to find.
The only issue I have are the almost constant minor spelling mistakes and what seem to be mixed up words. And I don't mean the purposefully broken dialogue when the speakers are still learning the languages.
Don't get me wrong. I have enjoyed reading this. That one issue is really a comparatively minor pet peeve of mine.
EDIT: Though I do have to ask. Why is this rated Mature?
None of the other tags reflect it and so far I have seen nothing that I would consider beyond Teen rating.
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Funny. I was listening to one of Ron Jone's TNG season 1 soundtracks as I was reading these last two chapters.
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Spooky.
Also, your name seems... familiar.
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Capt. Rico Sakara from deviantart: http://captricosakara.deviantart.com/
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That explains it.
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Yep. Feel free to view my artwork and favorite whatever you like.
If you want a commission, just note me on site.
7940032 Can you please hurry up on the next update.
This is a very good story. It needs a lot of editing work done, but the plot is easy to follow and is entertaining.
I ship David and Cheerilee! Hot Teacher/Dom fetish action!
It's always the quiet ones.
Um. Obvious application: sex slaves. You know... "Bring us the DNA of the person you want to bang, and we'll make it happen!"
"You want a toddler version of them, you sick fuck? SURE! (at a 250% premium)"
Yeah, explain that to a classroom of children. ;]
Heh. Heheheh. Heheheheheheeheheh...
(10 Internets if you know the quote)