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Yes I think the Pathfinder program would keep out all the Kirk wannabes. They would take the Picard and Janeway's as they understand when and how to break the rules appropriately. Now I wonder just how he David will handle the truth when he finds out just how magical this world actually is?
man you are good!what an entertaining chapter!and twilight devoloping a crush on david ,wow! so many things happening,so many adventures andsituations to come, outstanding!
Poor David, if Sultry had an accent similar to the Spa sisters, the joke wouldve made him cringe.
Oh dear, is this pre CMC, or pre Flutterfreind? Cos Im certain one way or the other, Jerome K Jerome is going to end up on that ship.
OH MY GOD AN UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS BEST DAY EVEEEEEEEEEEEEEER!!!!!
I'm gonna read it right now!
That was an excellent chapter!
I'm only sad I'm done reading it already.
Probably gonna have to wait a bit for the next one, but it will be worth it!!!
AWESOME STORY!
onward to the next chapter!
Federated Commonwealth? Is it headed by one Victor Steiner-Davion?
And is that Twily getting a bit of a crush? Adorkable pony is adorkable.
8211101 Actually, Kirk did break the rules responsibly. He saved cultures from terrible things and kept baddies from establishing hegemony over hapless weaker races. Unlike Jean-luc "let their race die because they're not advanced enough for us to help" Picard.
I could actually see myself piloting a Pathfinder ship. If I landed on Equis, I would probably get a huge headache while trying to figure out exactly how magic works, and I would probably document everything. I think too much like a scientist to interact with an alien species, I would stay in a chameleon suit at all times, I would eat meals in the ship, and I would transmit data to the ship as I gathered it, and I would send probes with information back to Earth excessively often.
good stuff
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Well he was trying to keep a low profile until Dash found him at that point it would most likely be best to try and see if friendly relations could be established as the last thing you need is an alien society up in arms and panicking.
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I did get the idea of the name from Battletech/Mechwarrior if only because I was trying to come up with different names and political powers. I think the name might also had been used in Gene Roddenberry’s Andromeda.
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I’m pretty sure it was “Systems Commonwealth” in Andromeda.
Federated Commonwealth comes from its two component nations united by the marriage of Hanse Davion of the Federated Suns to Melissa Steiner of the Lyran Commonwealth.
It’s funny, we have Lyra the pony whom the fandom thinks is obsessed with hands, and the Lyran Commonwealth, which has the symbol of a clenched metal fist as its insigne.
Anyway, keep on goin’, mang.
Very good chapter. Got nothing bad to say, I only ask you continue this awesome story.
Good chapter, but the new website'sformat is weird and unfamiliar.
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He made one fatal mistake which then gave him away, he ate outside with the shiny wrapping still with him. Had he not done that, Rainbow wouldn't have seen where he was.
I’m rather glad that I found this story. It’s really very enjoyable. David is quite a bit more unprofessional than I would expect in the reports he makes. Usually we had to be very carefully professional in reports, though I suppose things could change in the few centuries between now and when this is set to be.
There really is only one major issue I have, and that’s that you really could use an editor. While it has been getting a bit better in the recent chapters, the poor grammar is occasional immersion-breaking and is ubiquitous besides.
At any rate, I’m looking forward to where this goes. And I’m pretty sure that David can rest assured that no parent would name their daughter Sultry Desire...I expect she likely changed her name after becoming a model.
At what point will he realize he has to send a report, as a precaution against unforeseen circumstances? If they can see his ship, and they can move the sun and moon, then they can silence him AND destroy his ship before he could react appropriately. It is better to send periodic reports for the sake of redundancy.
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Actually, I thought he had been sending those reports. I'm waiting for the home office to send a retrieval team to bring back the crazy person who has clearly been faking his reports.
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That ship is sea worthy, but is it space worthy? Only time will tell.
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He said he had set things up so that if he was out of contact for more than two days, a report would be sent, but up to that point he wanted to get verifying information before sending anything back tot he home office.
ha..hahah..hahahahahahahahahahahaha he just hit on by an alien lifeform pricelss. Another good chapter though i do see your still making the same grammar and other erros but they still arent really detracting from the story
Gordon Freeman? HL3? POLITICS?!?!
yes I just did that joke
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Part of me wants to go a joke about how it's a few centuries later and still now half life 3
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Yeah, the number 3 is a myth.
How is the next chapter progressing for you?
If I was in his place I would definitely accept that offer from Sultry Desire.^_^
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Dude I just posted give me time to write first before asking that. Plus I just got done with a 7 hour drive home from visiting my parents I'm tired and need to unpack and stuff.
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Love the avatar pic by the way (more of a Yang fan myself) and you might just see a bit more of Sultry next chapter I think.
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Might want to check the time stamp before you send a flustered reply. His question was posted back in August.
Tek'ma'tek Red Bull, eh? ;]
"Oh?" - I said, as my ears perked up a bit. ;]
(though the "Sex" tag is painfully missing, sadly...)