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And why do i have a feeling Twilight is a cuddler in her sleep
7215004 Damn that's how I was going to open the next chapter.
7215077 I think that's a given; Twilight is all about the Adorkable, so cuddling and small amount of drool is expected...
Nice chapter.
Good luck on your voyage.
Twilight with science, second in destruction only to the CMC.
another dynamite chapter! twilight is like david said she is so adorable!thank you for making the evening so enjoyable with your fine story! take care and stay safe on your deployment and thank you for your service!
It's a sad day when a good writer has correct priorities :(we will all be waiting to right here for your triumphet return
*Internal screaming telling me not to comment this, but I do anyways* Sexual tension increases....
7215590 Thanks I hope things go well on it.
7216252 Thanks and it's kind of hard not to say that about Twilight when she gets all adorkable lol.
There's... no more "Next" button! I keep looking for it and it isn't there! Whyyyyy?
7220331 technically it is a future version of the show with the more advanced puppets used but I figured they would use the same gags that were hits.
7221319 Yeah but that's a spy satellite that was built for that reason, for me this is a science mission so the cameras would only need to be good enough to get what's going on on the surface given how expensive something like the ships would have to be, I can see them cutting costs on little things like that to help with the budget. It's why the Pathfinder and the Sparrow you've seen so far have been very economic in designs as space is a luxury on a ship. Even his camo suit as his personal scanners weren't for details analysis since the ones on the ships and their equipment are for that purpose so his suit would only have the bare basics.
It is a valid point you brought up I just didn't want to get into too much detail into the tech as I was asked to tone it down after chapter 1 on that stuff.
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I would use intensifies but oh well :P
Another yay, nice pacing and forethought.
Well, what this story doesn't have in grammar and such, it makes up with in the whole 'exploration' departament. Most other stories (with one exception) usually give up at this point and involve some sort of translation magic. So yeah, the whole point here is the alien contact, and I like seeing it explored more.