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Cute chapter!
7129072 Thanks, it's easy with the CMC, and I don't know why but I just liked the idea of them watching Sesame Street.
great chapter so heart warming and fun ! thank you for writing such a excellent story, its such a pleasure to read!
7129483 Thanks glad that you've been enjoying this story so far.
First Contact kids interaction with Sesame Street? Well,its usually humans first contact with the rest of the race etc.
Did he remember to demonstrate the sanitation facilitie, or are they going to have desperation in the morning trying to do cross legged theatre?
7130320 Actually I plan on a little on that in the next morning.
Loving this story so far! Just a little bit of criticism, when he says “AVI said something to the kids.”, I'm assuming it's "AVI, say something to the kids." Can't wait for the next update!
7130647 Damn I missed that but yeah that's what is supposed to be, spell checker missed that one.
a bit of a heart warming chapter.
7139116 thanks lol, I really wanted something nice for this and you can expect more with the CMC later on as the story goes on.
AWESOME, JUST AWESOME !!!!!!
7146351 Thanks glad you seem to enjoy it so much lol.
7129183 1980's Sesame Street only; good to see you used that one. It's universal.
So, Sesame Street is a still a thing in the 23rd century? Heh, cool
Glad to see that you used the cmc to progress the story through language lessons. Far better chapter than the previous.
Slight typo near the end; unless a command to "dime" the lights means to recuse them by 10% every few seconds. Otherwise, very interesting.
You've only got 2100+ views? Should be ten times that because this is really good, you get another yay.