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8838427
lol, well I think that's a first
Dammit, this was a really good chapter but the ending has gotten me really excited gor the next update.
The thing I am most looking forward to is David contacting Earth/Nearest Human base and the reaction it gets.
I'm betting it's Professor Peach , in the hallway, with the pipe...
I'm sure this is going to cause more than a few trust issues...
Starlight Glimmer perhaps? Chrysalis? Lyra? So many possibilities
Good thing they couldnt get a good enough scry, remote scan of the engine room to port directly. Then again, depending on the design of the engine, if they port into the largest open space, it could be the ingnition chamber of the reactor etc.
Why do I think Chrysalis needs to take a spacewalk with out a spacesuit?
8865318
well there was that or the risk of teleporting into a solid object as well.
8865107
Glad to see another chapter. Awkward experiences from multiple angles, but hey that's life.
wow another pony who i had given up for dead. there has to be a book of dark rituals up for sale somewhere probably ebay or something with all the authors that have been comin back from the dead lately
8865508
i wish their were more of the ones IM watching coming back from the dead i have so many dead stories its depressing
Ok Show of Hooves who would have joined Fancy and Fleur....
8865340
if shes anything like a xenomorph it'll just make her angry .... man they've jettisoned a grunt and a queen out the airlocks and they still kick around and can apparently scream in space,
8865543
That is when we go with the tried and true method, tons of lasers, bullits, and heavy ordnance. I doubt she will live but if she does she should have a healthy dose of fear of pissing off humanity. Plus it would help out our pony friends dealing with a threat to their nation.
Lol he’s “Lost in Space”
Well I'd say he ended up getting into more than he expected this evening.
There aren't many unicorns that can actually teleport... so who was this? And I hope the AVI actually has video recorded of the perpetrator.
And while I am very happy to see an update (Thank you very much for that), I do hope if you're going to leave us on little cliffhangers like that we can see what's going on a little sooner?
Well....well...well. If it isn't Agent G himself. I gotta admit, I didn't expect a move like this. I thought you'd been out of the service for almost a year now, but now I hear you're still doing things. I have to admit agent...it seems you surprise me again and again. Anyway, welcome back to the service. Glad you're out of retirement.
8865594
I could see humanity keeping changelings as pets. All they need is a little love plus no scooping duty hot damn. Dogs/cats watch out theirs a new #1 pet. It cooks it cleans it'll turn into whoever you wanna sleep with that night.
8865508
After only 4 months since the last chapter? at least give it a year lol.
8866070
Sorry things keep getting in the way plus I don't have the spare time like I used to. I also had to replace my laptop as the old one wouldn't take a charge, then the new one was crap, had to take that back and got a better replacement...so yeah lots of technical issues kept getting in my way.
8865508
Yep. I don't know quite what it is but I even saw a faved story from 2013 come back with a new chapter.
It's nice actually. Real nice.
8865955
Nope all of that is just for her.
As a species they are alright, it is just her that needs that level of “punishment”.
The following occurs to me with this teleportation intrusion on the Arrow.
1) that David should now worry whether the Pathfinder itself is secure, the pony teleported in potentially without a line of sight, which with a telescope is possible on the Pathfinder and if its damaged he's stranded, if its within teleport range
2) the concept that if the unicorn had wanted to it could have done alot of damage from within the Arrow, even if only by smashing something or choosing upon being found to yank the nearest item to study / reverse engineer later, thus stranding him on the surface
3) Wonder if the intruder was given it was a pony a spy sent by either of the rulers to try and learn something of his technology without his approval
4) realization of how much of his security the ponies can potentially bypass to do him or his equipment harm due to magic
8866148
yeah it is real nice eh
8866070
this is like the 4th author for me that has come back from what seemed like nowhere but felt like posting that comment here as this was the better story to be updated lately
8866255
The line of sight I will explain in the next chapter I had that planned, and you mean Sparrow not Arrow I think lol. But yeah I planned for him and Twilight to do some experimenting after this, you'll see what soon.
Things are starting to get real good now. Xd
Can't wait for the next update!!!
Oh that ending has me very excited for the next installment. I also really enjoyed the beginning and middle... I loved it through and through in all honesty.
I truly wonder who the "pony" is? If it is infact a pony.
8865231>>8865274 I'm betting on the Professor too because if I remember correctly, in this universe, Bon Bon is a secret agent and thinks "what if a unicorn tries to teleport into the ship. Granted that was a high-level spell and only powerful/talented ones could pull it off but it could still happen. ". Next being Chrysalis.
I like Fleetfoot!^_^
I wouldn't have turned down Sultry Desire.
I would have said "yes" to Fancy and Fleur and got Sultry as well to have a nice foursome and some good times.^_^
A very well done chapter once again.^_^
I hope to see more chapters soon.
im loving this so far dude keep up the awesome work!
looking forward to the next chapter!
8866427
He has to be angry, he said "NO!"
and with the professor I'm thinking he wants to begin his own research project, and maybe he'll behave badly to the human due to his attitude towards him...
LOL! The whole pie joke!
That's Hair-Pie for ya!
8866412
Yeah I meant sparrow
I figured if anything other than line of sight the Pathfinder would be protected more on the basis of how far an average unicorn can teleport, I figured a parking orbit object would only be in range of say alicorns and a few powerful unicorns like Starlight Glimmer for example, others simply wouldn't be able to teleport that far due to power constraints or something other than line of sight.
8865107
Speaking of firsts, it'd be smart if David used one of his one-way mail courier probes to inform Earth about Equestria.
Otherwise, if DISCORD destroyed the Pathfinder spaceship, David would be stranded on Equestria with no hope of a rescue mission.
And since discovering sentient alien life is such a big deal, I think Earth would prefer periodic updates rather than waiting for David to finish all of his research, which could takes months.
Man I love this story, such great chapters and characters. I wish they didn't take so long to come out so the antispation wasn't so high lol. Great Job on the chapter!
Huh. I just read Piercing the Heavens, and this sounds an awful lot like that Fleetfoot. Adorable, but w. o. w.
Nope, maybe not. This is Fleetfoot, secret long lost fraternal twin of Cloud Kicker.
Wow, that's harsh, AJ! (I think you meant "shucks" )
8865107
Yo, just tossing out personal tastes, but isn't him going with twilight a bit cliche? Personally I think it'd be more interesting if sultry had some luck and you developed her into a more full charachter. It'd be an interesting curve ball.
Otherwise I love it entirely! Good work!!
9011962
Watch DEATH BATTLE Rainbow Dash vs. Starscream, but even if you don't believe the from that video you still have to notice that the Mach cone that forms around her before she does the Sonic Rainboom already shows that she has already broken the sound barrier at that point. A Mach only forms when something is already broken the sound barrier, at least I believe it does.
8865534
I'd certainly consider it!
Eiffel Tower for a classy mare like Fleur ;)
8341380
Maybe they meant atmospheric flight using an open cycle system.
9012006
Also, RD's shock cone doesn't seem to have much bearing on actual speed(measured relative to other objects) AND is clearly made of rainbow magic making the mach 5 to 10 argument invalid