Lesson of Life
Sonic stopped Pachacamac as soon as they entered an entirely blue void. Pachacamac looked around to see images of other worlds, one with a somewhat obese plumber and one with a man in a green tunic clashing swords with a humanoid demon. The Chaos infused Echidna was confused by these images whilst Sonic simply smirked, though his confident expression quickly turned to one of severity.
"What is this place?" The red Mobian asked.
"Oh, this place? It's nothing special think of it as an infinite type of void, it's the infinite space between dimensions… I thought if we're gonna end this, we need to have no sort of distractions and more of an epic two on one confrontation… what do you say? Ready to end this?!" Sonic defiantly asked, as he exploded with power, his quills now gaining more height and a Crimson Gold aura and hue.
"Let's end this Hedgehog!" Pachacamac angrily stated, and in an instant the Pachacamac charged towards the mobian couple, though Sonic simply looked over to Rainbow in a sort of ' let's take him down together' expression and without a word, he grabbed her by the arms as she now span with her legs outwards as Sonic let her go, sending her rocketing forward directly into Pachacamac's gut, and in that instant the void around them changed to display a Castle in their general vicinity and the obese plumber from before was looking at them though his face seemed frozen though upon close inspection you would see his mouth closing very slowly, and without another word they were gone from that world.
"In this void, time moves slower and with every hit we change our venue, this battle will take place all over the multiverse!" Sonic explained, and now started to charge towards Pachacamac with everything he had, and the dark echidna caught Sonic's fist in his hands, which surprised Sonic, specifically because he could go at 1,000,000 times the speed of light.
"Nice update, now you'll die in this void of your creation!" Pachacamac said as he tried to strike Sonic, though Sonic dodged at the last second.
"Too slow Patchy, Rainbow! Excalibur can cut through anything but it has a mind of its own and will protect you from danger, so just trust it and use Solar Slash!" Sonic ordered, to which Rainbow tried to ask what that meant but before she could speak she felt her hands grip around the sword and she did a giant backflip before charging straight at Sonic and Pachacamac and Sonic teleported away at the last moment for Pachacamac to get the full force of the fireball created from Excalibur.
"Take this!" Rainbow defiantly yelled as Pachacamac now struggled to keep the fireball from exploding.
"Hehe, is this all you've got? I'm going enjoy tearing you apart!" Pachacamac said as he struck Rainbow sending her back into Sonic, both were in shock at this development, though what came next scared them beyond belief… Pachacamac was now letting the dark energy consume him and alter his form, to now have an even more menacing appearance.
"Now hedgehogs… prepare to meet your doom!" Pachacamac yelled out charging towards the two super mobians, with Sonic thinking only one thing…
Well good thing we're indestructible right?
They were launched away, as the scenery changed to a dark forest as a young boy on a horse was looking around for his lost companion, this scene faded as quick as it came and they were back in the azure void, space all around them.
"Give me your best shot hedgehogs!" Pachacamac taunted as he placed his index and 1st finger out and pulled them back egging the aforementioned mobian hedgehogs to attack him.
Great he's getting even more powerful, I can't use the super emeralds, that would tear apart the fabric of the universe, if I used them in this void, me and Rainbow are gonna have to combine our attacks to hopefully have enough force to damage him and transform him, it's not helping by his now rising power, we only have half an hour to beat him in this void. Sonic thought, the severity of the situation dawning on him.
"Rainbow, combine your Rainboom with my Sonic Boom and rotate around me we can do the Chaos drill, it's a move me and my younger self used against Eggman way back when, take my hand" Sonic said, offering his appendage to the Rainbow-haired mobian, whom took it without second thought and immediately they sped towards Pachacamac, and entered a twirling motion which created a drill construct from their speed.
"Chaos drill!" Sonic yelled and in an instant their drill construct obscured their bodies and the blurring effect from their speed encircled one another in a rainbow coloured drill that sped towards Pachacamac and struck him full on, and sent him to a universe with a young azure metallic boy running towards a castle with a skull on it, though as quickly as it appeared it disappeared in the blue.
"Argh!" Pachacamac yelled out in pain as the attack had damaged him greatly as his body now had scratch marks and signs of bruising from him trying to resist the drill.
"Hehe, did some damage to ya, so to answer your question, NO that's not all we've got!" Rainbow said, looking to Sonic, both of them sharing smiles of equal eagerness and happiness apparent on them. Though something seemed to unnerve them, and whilst they had seen the damage that their attack at done, something was making them uneasy.
Sonic felt something tug at the back of his brain and then felt Crimson's consciousness talk.
Yo Sonic, there's a big tear in the space-time continuum here, you mind patching it up? Crimson sarcastically asked.
Crap, I almost forgot! Since I opened a breach and haven't stopped it's caused a spatial rift or anomaly, essentially this breach will evolve to create dark matter, and it will eventually build up to form… Sonic stopped, almost as if the next phrase would destroy the universe.
To form what!? Crimson asked, very overtaxed as he started stopping Tirek's blow against Applejack.
A black hole Sonic gravely stated.
Oh great, well how long do we have till the universe is destroyed? If space movies have taught me anything Crimson joked, as he stopped Tirek's attack towards Applejack.
I'd say a solid 12 minutes Sonic calculated.
Well, first off why such an awkward number? 12 really? And second off, I'd advise that you'd hurry the hell up! Crimson worriedly said, as he pushed Tirek back with a Chaos Barrage.
Yeah, yeah hurry up, "OK rainbow we need to take him out now! We don't have much more time, now I need you to do something, I need you to purify him after I attack with my deadliest Chaos Attack, after I damage him you take him out, purify him with your energy and run as fast as you can out of here, and have one of the clones contact the Zone cops and take Pachacamac to the Zone Prison alright?" Sonic requested.
"NO! If you do this it'll drain you completely, and you could die!" Rainbow refused as Sonic had offered his hand to her and she smacked it away.
"I'm sorry I won't be able to make it to our date, but this is concerning the whole universe Rainbow, if you don't do this the whole universe will be destroyed, please Rainbow… For me?" Sonic asked, joking at the mention of their ever approaching 'date'. Though to respond to the comment she hit him across the face.
"Can you be serious about something for once in your life?! Sonic I can't hide that I care about you, but I don't think you know how much, you see before you came to our world, I didn't have any troubles ,I was totally detached and happy with my friends and was the fastest in the school and what I thought was the universe, but then I met you, who totally destroyed my expectations and realities on speed, going at speeds I thought were impossible and you totally understood me better than my friends ever could because of our love of speed. You were willing to sacrifice yourself to save us all, and have done it many times over from what your friends had told me, you were a hero, and more than that a textbook example of what I wasn't, I never thought that someone like you could exist or even give me such excitement and fun. And in the short time I had known you I had developed such a feeling of happiness when I was with you. I don't think that you're world decided to turn me into a hedgehog just because of my speed I think it was because of my relation to you, just know you'll always hold a special place in my heart" Rainbow said, though her speech was cut off by Pachacamac charging at her with a chaos blade drawn through instead of her taking the blade Sonic did. Demonstrating a thousand times over why he is a hero.
"Ugh.. That… hurt" Sonic said in a somewhat jokey, light-hearted approach to laugh off the severity of the situation.
"SONIC!" Rainbow yelled as he struck Pachacamac through the chest, causing him to bleed, though his blood now the same colour as oil.
"Agh… Rainbow, what have you… you've got to get out of here now, since you've stabbed a mobian Excalibur will start denying you energy…OK… I'll use Divine Supernova to purify him… then… you… GET OUT OF HERE!" Sonic yelled, leaving Rainbow in shock at Sonic's tone.
" You meddling hedgehog, you will not slay me!" Pachacamac yelled in defiance as he started flowing with a discharge of his chaos blood crackling and dispersing his energy alongside the void.
"Sonic, I won't leave you, you need to come through too!" Rainbow yelled back in anger.
"YOU'D JEOPARDIZE THE WHOLE UNIVERSE FOR ME, RAINBOW I'M NOT WORTH IT, GET BACK AND GET READY AS SOON AS I RELEASE THIS ATTACK GRAB HIM AND GO!" Sonic said as his body started dissipating, and became part of the void.
"You will not banish the darkness!" Pachacamac furiously roared as he started rising in the void and discharging more of his chaos energy.
"Hm we don't have much time, see ya Rainbow, it's been short but sweet …Love ya… See ya around" Sonic said, as he kissed Rainbow, surprising her and as quickly as their lips connected he left… a feeling of bliss on her mind, though that kiss was more tragic by the one she had received it from… her true love… whom was about to die.
"LET'S END THIS… DIVINE SUPERNOVA!" Sonic screamed as he released all his energy in a bright light and an explosion occurred in the void, and this caused Rainbow to do something she felt that her pride wouldn't let her do for the longest time…
Cry… she had let the first tear fall from her eye as she saw this explosion and reluctantly pushed her feet forward and blasted off towards the now cured Pachacamac, whom now had the appearance of his tribal chief garb. Though Sonic was out of sight. And the void was becoming unstable, from the sudden jolt of positive energy it had received.
Needless to say through teary eyes she still complied to the hedgehog's wishes and took the elderly Echidna through the void opening and Crimson quickly came to her side closing the void behind her, before pulling her out of the way of another one of Tirek's attack, and placing on the ground, though her distraught form still unnerved Crimson.
"Guys, let's end this now! Chaos Divination!" Crimson yelled as he struck Tirek in the gut his hand emanating a golden glow, and instantly transforming Tirek into his weakest form.
The other Chaos kids, mirrored this technique and before long, all of the villains had been purified, though the Chaos Kids were very much exhausted as that purification had drained them of a lot of energy.
"Hehe… looks like… we did it… guys… we finally did it, the world is safe, we need to get back to Knuckles, but we need to talk to Rainbow about what happened" Crimson suggested as he walked over to the crying female hedgehog, tears constantly abundant in her eyes as Crimson could tell without her even displaying it that Sonic had sacrificed himself again… and he may not come back now.
"Hey RD… listen… alright… he would never put you last on his priority and you were so important to him that he put you first… we need to happy for him… he's in a much better place now… a… a place where he can't be slowed down and he can run to his heart's content, and maybe one day he'll come back" Twilight soothed as Rainbow started crying her heart out into Twilight's shoulder, leaving her shoulder stained by her shattered heart.
"Hehe, yeah I would be in a better place, if I was dead, but I gotta honor my date thing with you… well it couldn't be that bad really" Sonic spoke as light started streaming together to form Sonic, though in a light particle form.
"Hey Rainbow sorry about the crap connection, here in the chaos force reception's pretty crap hehe" Sonic joked, though Rainbow now over- flowed with joy and she tried to grab him but went through his body.
"I should've told you, my body is moving so fast I can't be touched. Listen can you bring Tails to me there is something I need to explain to him" Sonic requested, to which Jade obliged and brought Sonic's brother to him.
Sonic then decided to place his hand on Tails' head, and in an instant Tails woke up to find himself in a white void, alongside his brother, whom has his always happy go-lucky smile on his face.
"Hey Tails… I know you're mad at me, but please I want to make things right, right now… I know that you want to stay with Sally, and I'm totally letting you do that, whatever you choice you make I'll totally support, though don't think I won't keep in touch little bro". Sonic happily joked, callously and absent-minded of the whole fight they had had an hour ago almost.
"What is this place?" Tails pondered as he kept looking around at the empty space.
"It's my mind, I decided to have a little bit of chat and for us to come to an agreement, you and me talk to talk like we used to and try to calm and respect each other's decisions" Sonic explained.
"To be honest, I'm so sorry, I got mad because I wanted you to let me decide for myself, but in my stupidity I nearly destroyed Mobius, our home with my aunt Sally, and the rest of the family, even my parents and I'll never be able to forgive myself, so whilst I may want to join you I can't I need to pay for my crimes" Tails rationalized.
"Tails, you were just angry it happens to the best of us, and really you shouldn't have to make up for my mistakes, you were totally innocent, it's my fault this started, not trusting you, or believing you could do things on your own. But the thing is I won't be able to pay for my actions, I'm going to be going to the Chaos Force and be taught how to connect and expand my training past what Tikal and Chaos have taught me, I'll still visit you every once in a while, and take care of Rainbow for me alright, you seem to be better with the ladies than I am " Sonic half-heartedly joked.
"I'll do my best Sonic… I promise big bro.. And you … AGH!" Tails yelled, and suddenly they were both pulled back to reality as Monkey Khan and G.U.N. Soldiers surrounded the group of Chaotic Mobians and deployed electric containment nets for each of them including the Chaos Kids.
"What the hell are you doing Khan? We're not the bad guys these guys are… take them, not us" Sonic asked.
"Chaos beings and unknown entities from another dimensions you are under violation of the Acorn law of possessing unknown power,that directly threatens the monarchy, you will be put on trial and questioned for you involvement in the possible creation of a black hole and disruption of the acorn kingdom" Khan read out.
"What the hell? Khan please don't do this… they had done nothing wrong you can't put them on trial and accuse or even suspect they were responsible for this calamity, you don't know all the facts, accusing in a court of law, from what I can tell from my last ordeal with the justice system, without evidence is a complete farce, you have to have evidence" Sonic pleaded.
"Well… Tails is with him I think this this is proof enough, Miles Tails Prower was consorting with an enemy of the acorn kingdom therefore he is lawfully found guilty of crimes of treason and direct attack on the monarchy" Khan said, as he had an ever increasing smug look on his face, looking as though he had beaten Sonic at his own game, by playing that recorded clip of Sonic admitting Tails was involved with Tirek.
"Please Sal… you can't let Tails go to Mobian jail… please Sal… you love him don't you, you can't stand for this" Sonic pleaded as Sally was also present at the Master Emerald Shrine.
"I'm sorry Sonic the decision is final" Sally gravely stated, as she callously and almost unforgivably dismissed Tails, this destroyed Tails soul as his family had now given up on him, he had nothing to live for.
Tails, I can't help you now, I need to know because I still want to make the decision do you want to come with me, or stay in prison? Sonic mentally asked to Tails, whom surprised Sonic with his answer…
Please take me with you big bro, I can't… I need to, I don't want to go to Jail or have Sally see me this way please Sonic take me with you. Tails replied, to which Sonic nodded his head and in an instant slammed his hands on the ground, which made a giant golden explosion of light and when it cleared everyone was gone.
When the group opened their eyes they found they were at Tails Workshop, surrounded by tools and other mechanical devices."OK Chaos Kids take everything that you can find of Tails' tools, and I'll teleport the Tornado and everything else to our secret base… hurry I don't think it'll take long for them to find us… Chaos Control!" Sonic yelled, now ending up in the old lab, Kint's lab this place whilst bringing back memories of those good times still made Sonic feel welcomed, as he teleported the first two tornado fighter jet's into this lab, and when he got to the secret underground compartment of Kint's lab where Sonic was tested on his speed all those years ago he teleported the Hurricane Mech.
When everything was set up in Kint's lab, the group agreed to head to bed, All of the Chaos Kids, sleeping alongside the significant other in the mane six when the Chaos extended the lab to have multiple rooms to sleep in.
When Sonic and Rainbow got their chamber, Rainbow looked over to Sonic and in the midnight moonlight they shared a passionate kiss that threatened to be almost faked, though the emotions they fetl for each other were real.
"Sonic, never scare me like that ever again, alright I couldn't live without you, you are my everything and I couldn't imagine a world where you don't exist in my life anymore" Rainbow lovingly expressed to Sonic, to which he replied.
"I'm not going anywhere, Rainbow you can't get rid of me that easily, otherwise who would be there to cause some dimensional chaos every once in a while" Sonic joked.
"I love Sonic" Rainbow stated, as they shared another kiss and Sonic's particles reformed giving him his now dark blue shade of fur and mobian appearance, and he replied.
"I love you too Rainbow" Sonic said, his mind now fluttering to his imagination, though what he envisioned scared him…
He found himself in a dark void, almost a room where the lights had turned off and when the lights had been activated the figure he saw shocked him awake as he felt the last words on the nightmare haunt his very soul…
Mephiles is coming.
Sonic looked to the window to see that nothing was there and now assuming that it was just a bad nightmare returned to his mobian girlfriend.
Though as he closed his eyes the Moon gained more light eerily, and a single crystalline hand formed on the wall, pulling back to reveal an all too familiar mobian in the likeness of shadow, though composed of sharp crystal which seemed to slice through the soul.
The eyes of this creature looked towards his sleeping adversary, and he only thought one thing…
You're time will come… Iblis Trigger… and it's coming sooner than you think, for Mephiles is the reaper who has come to collect.
And without saying another word he disappeared, leaving only Sonic and Rainbow in their hopeful bliss of a new day, that may never come…
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Hey, look, a stereotypically sh
tty Sonic fanfiction!
Hehe, well can't please everyone, why is it undesirable to you? Please explain, I truly want to know how i have offended you or this is in your distaste.
How long have you read my story, or did you just skip to the end, I honestly like to know because your story states lesson of lie, which is the last chapter, please respond.
7267517 Dude just ignore the haters. Don't pay them any attention or get discouraged.
7267385 Hello Madam/ Sir, how is story distasteful to you, what you do to improve it or make it better in your eyes, and secondly have you read the whole story or have you just read the end, please let me know, I am not trying to antagonize you, genuinely wish to know because I saw something to the side of your name besides the like and dislike buttons that states 'Lesson of Life' which is my final chapter, please respond with haste, I really wish to be criticized for my work though fairly, please explain your reasons for disliking my story
7270004 Well...
It's a tragically comedic romantic crossover adventure with gore in an alternate universe.
The more tags you have, the higher the likelihood that you have no idea what you're actually writing and are just putting on all tags possible.
The grammar in the description is, while not the worst, somehow incredibly clunky, making reading it a chore. I can only presume that the story is like this too. If it isn't, fix the description's grammar.
And that's not even getting into the subject matter. "Alternate Universe" is often used to mess up canon to the extreme, and what I see doesn't make me hopeful.
Also, everyone and their grandmother has heard of these types of things. Nothing but warnings and prophecies of despair and stuff.
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I have checked out your profile and you have the same issue on Forbidden Love,which is a; Dark Adventure, which is random, romantic and Sad, hm, not trying it seem as though you are hypocritical, just trying to find evidence to support your claim with the mindset of following in your example, which not all of your stories have this problem, it's just specifically 'Forbidden Love'.
Also, this story most of the tags i placed on the story, it is tragic and causes many of the characters much heartbreak, for reasons apparent in the Sonic comics and specifically for the main six, because they left their dimension for 5 or 2 years I'm still unclear on that after season 6. Additionally this all does take place in alternative universes and dimensions, specifically speaking, this takes place for the Sonic characters in a universe where Silver is logically canonized, additionally I fused aspects of Fleetway, Archie comics and the games into one stories, alongside a bit of Sonic Underground... this was my attempt to rationalize the stories of Sonic that all took place in different universes and combine them into one.
Additionally most Fanfiction, for better or for worse specifically doesn't focus on Chronological timings or specific events that occur... 'My little Dashie' , 'Rainbow Factory' and even 'Lullaby for a princess are all not specifically canonized, though do those get a pass simply because they state alternative universe? Most of your stories aren't canonized, M.A Larson never canonized your stories so wouldn't that also be screwing with canon?
Just some food for thought, though you make some convincing arguments thank you for responding with speed.
Yours Sincerely- HedgehogofRed1999
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If i'm being honest I'm not the best at writing cohesively, having one event happen and then the next, though thanks for checking out my story.
7270298 On Forbidden love: I didn't write that. The basic plot was written by one of my friends here. I just edited it to make the grammar tolerable, and gave advice and stuff. Maybe if you actually looked before making assumptions, you'd be more credible.
Oh, wait. I haven't read this story. Double standards, yay! I'll read a chapter or two after I've picked apart your argument.
Really, reading one of my semi-stories (I write, friend conceives) and then attacking it is not the way to refute my arguments. That's being combative, and it makes you look like an enormous idiot.
I attacked your story. Fine, I'm not going to deny that. The logical thing to do is defend it, but instead, you attacked one of my stories (as far as you knew) without refuting my points.
That's enough ranting about that.
I didn't make the tags for Forbidden Love. You're pinning something I didn't do on me.
And, about your tagging of this story (which I see you've fixed somewhat) the tragedy isn't a problem. It's the comedy tag that is. People misuse the hell out of the comedy tag and I have no idea why. Comedy stories are supposed to be there specifically to make people laugh. This story, clearly, is not meant to do that.
Also, about this universe... You're basically outright saying it;s a clusterf
k. Instead of taking the perfectly fine universes you had on display, you rolled them all together and wadded them with duct tape. But I'm not stopping you; Hell, I don't even know whether it's that bad, you just aren't presenting it favorably.
Also, "fanfiction doesn't focus on specific events"?
Also, using Rainbow Factory as an example to prove your point? There are dozens of better fics you could use. The only reason Rainbow Factory took off in the first place was because it was new and interesting. Now, the only thing protecting it from a wave of scorn is nostalgia, because it's just not a good fanfic. The plot is contrived ant the characterisation of Rainbow Dash? Out the window. Rainbow Factory messes up canon to the extreme as well, I've never heard of Lullaby for a Princess, and, as far as I can see, My Little Dashie is only connected to the MLP universe by a name. Either way, the examples you brought up are just as much of a mess as your fic.
Just because your story hasn't been canonized doesn't mean it can't have the same feel as the canon universe, and lock well with it. My stories (I'll admit it) intentionally screw with canon for a comedic effect, but you have no such excuse.
I'm enjoying this debate. Sorry I responded late, I had to go to bed.
I for one, liked it!
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So you didn't write it but you took credit? Otherwise it wouldn't be under your name, how do you expect someone to react when seeing this fanfic under your name?
How am I supposed to know you did the specifics, there is no indication of that anywhere, regardless if you were one who was keen on grammar etc, I said 'most' of fanfiction doesn't focus on chronological events, true many do focus on a specific episode etc, but i guess what I mean is that they don't base them off the show or even go 100% with the chronological order.
Like 'Rainbow Factory', I think it's called 'Allgrezza'/ the one with Octavia and Vinyl, sorry couldn't think of it at the time or 'fallout:equestria, those don't follow a timeline and yet are some of the best fanfiction around.
Also Read the actual story before saying my fic is a mess, maybe you could find something you like, but just like your accusing me of doing, you're also making assumptions on my work, maybe if you read it and pointed out legitimate flaws with the work rather than this debate on the description and tags " you'd be a bit more credible".????
7272497 The reason I put the fic in my fabs bookshelf was because I edited it and I want it to be more well recieved, for my friend. End of story. Stop attacking Forbidden Love and start refuting my points on your story.
Stop bringing up other fics and start refuting my points.
You have a point about the not reading, but still. I'll fix that.
If you mention Forbidden Love one more time, this discussion is over. Because it's not about Forbidden Love, it's about this fic. And, last time I checked, they are different fics.
Defend your fic and get back on topic.
Also, two paragraphs in and it's just as bad as I predicted, mostly because of the exposition that anyone reading this fic knows already. And the grammar is incredibly clunky and bad. My hopes are low.
7272572 I don't understand why you have to be so harsh. So what if he writes a Sonic fanfic? Just because you don't like it doesn't mean you have to act like a complete jerk. If you don't like it, then don't read it and go do something else instead of acting like a tool. Just randomly calling a story sh*t without having even read it was uncalled for. You started this anyway for no reason.
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Thank you for liking the story also update, T.I.W.F and me are now friends and squashed da beef.