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punisher143


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Not much draw towards it, but you seem to know how to write, so you get my like for that.

Why are some ponies genderbent?

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This is a mature extension of another of my stories called The 63 Files.

Hothothohothot...LIKE!:pinkiehappy:
Eeh, It was pretty good...7/10
SHUT UP AND CLICK THE LIKE BUTTON!

671941
Nice to know your insane side liked it. For me, it was at least good writing practice.

This is quiet good actually.

Finally a story wher the stallion use condom for sex and let the lady being up and not down as usual. I think the part where Twiluight lost her virginy was great too even if I think she made it a big harder and that's why it hert that why it huts her mutch.

still reading, but nice No More Heroes 2 reference :yay::yay::yay:

Edit: and done pretty good work :pinkiehappy:

An enjoyable story, quite touching.

Just a quick note, since ponies experience estrus (a rather obvious sign of when they're fertile) they wouldn't have to worry about pregnancy unless Twi was in heat, and she'd know it if she was. :pinkiehappy: on a similar note, in case you decide to do it in the future, ponies have no gag reflex... run with it :raritywink:

Looking forward to future chapters :twilightsmile:

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All fair points, although I prefer not to think about the anatomy too intimately. I've learned way too much about that subject in the name of proper research for stories. Although I do find the fact that they don't have a gag reflex to be kind of interesting. So thanks for sharing. :pinkiesmile:

Oh god just when I had gotten over officer hotpants I see this. CURSE YOU

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:rainbowhuh: "Why does the cake smell like baby oil? Oh god, WHERE'S PINKIE?!"

when is next Chapter?

Holy goddamn! 14K words on a frickin' clop chapter?
I gotta go write something else before I lose my mind.

“… Spike, I’m having a conversation with a letter. What is going on?”

Really made me laugh :rainbowlaugh:

Cures long chapters and my short attention span. Also when is Twixie?:twilightsmile:

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I need to level on that. It's not good: the terminology is terrible, it's way too short for my liking, and it pretty much looks like what a first time clop fic would look like. That and my obsessive compulsive need to never look at anything I write after about a two month period more or less makes it difficult for me to fix those problems.

I'm not too keen on releasing subpar material.

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That's Okay. I understand the feeling as well, somethings have to be perfect before I do any else about it. I will wait for Twixie, I am patient. More so now since I started watching Doctor Who.

Dear Scooteroll,

First of all, how are you? It’s been a while since we’ve seen each other hasn’t it? Well, it turns out I’m going to have some free time soon and I’m going to spend it visiting Rarity in Ponyville.

I’ve heard you’ve had some kind of falling out some time ago, but I hope you can still come. Wouldn’t it be great if the original Cutie Mark Crusaders all got together in Ponyville?

I’d understand if you don’t want to go, but I would really like to see you again. If you are going to come, you don’t need to write back and I’ll see you there!

Sincerely, Sweetie Belle.

P.S. Nopony really told me what happened with you. I guess it’s none of my business, but did something happen between you and Applebloom? Either way, I hope to see you soon.

just pointing out a random mistake

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I'm okay with this.


-Delta-

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Thanks for catching that, it's been fixed.

You Good Sir have been rewarded with all of my feels the Twidash one of a fantastic bit and i enjoyed with all my heart keep up the good work i wish to more transpire like this thank you for your time :ajsmug:

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