Cancelled because it's a piece of garbage that never should have existed in the first place. If you read this, you will be dumber for it. Just saying.
When Twilight Sparkle and her friends meet dimensionally displaced colt versions of themselves, both groups find themselves in a situation they never expected: falling in love with their other selves.
With the possibility of marriage in the near future, will these dimensionally crossed lovers find happiness?
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You're beating a dead horse 4.bp.blogspot.com/-zrjuYgZKUns/Tqn-HYcFalI/AAAAAAAABv8/R1NW_WFYsO4/s1600/beat_dead_horse2.jpg
1335198 a lot of fanfic writers do dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
mainly people that write FO:E spinoffs
How are people disliking this? A bit too prejudice if you ask me!
The idea is good, not sure wether it is original but that doesnt matter. All you need is to improve on the detail level, add several small details to the description of the scenery or the weather, it gives a story a deeper sense of reality, also, you should plan on giving some background on how they met their counterparts and how they fell in love, it wouldnt hurt to take each couple and dedicate a chapter to how they interact with each other, other than that, the grammar is very good, sentences are placed together in a very good way, if you could make longer chapters this story would definetly make it to my favorites, for now though, i shall give a like and keep my eye on it. Have a good one!
One of the things that worried me about the male Mane 6 leaving their world is that since they're the Elements of Harmony there, they would essentially leave their world defenseless.
My curiosity must be piqued, so i shall fave this for now.
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You know, that was exactly what I was going to do. Dedicate a chapter to each pairing before the end.
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Sometimes beating a dead horse can be fun.
Okay... this is freaky. This is a kind of weird incest thing really, isn't it? I mean, their colt-selves are basically fraternal twin brothers, "the sperm that never made it", aren't they? Add onto that the possible magical consequences (matter meets antimatter anyone?) That's probably why Celestia has gone rushing off for advice.
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No, they aren't. They're from 'On A Cross And Arrow', a story where the Mane Six travel to an Alternate Universe where everyone is Rule 63ed. The Original Designs of the Stallion Mane Six are by Trotsworth on Deviantart.com.
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Precisely - Them except GBed. That means genetically near-identical apart from the gender. Not really twins but as good as.
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So? People ship Pinkamena with Pinkie. You can handle some story with selfcest. If you don't like it, then don't read it.
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I think you just nailed the reason why this seems to be the most controversial thing I've written, bar some of earlier stories.
This whole self shipping thing with the colt mane 6 has been around for a while, and I have some reservations about it. I guess what I'm trying to say is that this is very much reliant on the MST3K mantra: 'it's just a story, so don't take it too seriously.'
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And if you could send me a link to such a story, it would be much appreciated. For research of course.
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I haven't really seen that much of stories, but I know a few shippers, and have seen some pictures.
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Guess I have some searching to do. Thank you for this revelation.
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No problem. Although I'd be lying if I said I don't find Pinkamena and Pinkie together as a shipping a little bit cute. Like in a funny-haha-cute way.
Its not the selfcest itself that bothers me..
Ok it is, but for a different reason.
With pinkamena and pinkie, you can at least say they have differing personalities, and would influence their respective lives with their differences, but with R63XCanon, there is no difference. You are in love with someone exactly like you, every memory you've had, they have too. You'll never disagree, sure, but its boring. They are you, and that means marriage will never change you. You'll always be the same, because you'll not have to adjust your life to their own, no emotional growth, nothing. It leads to a stagnant pairing between two ponies exactly the same. And even pairings between two very similar ponies, they still have their own lives, their own cutie marks, talents. Its not interesting, or healthy. You would be exactly the same as the day you met, 60 years in the future. Do you really think thats healthy?
Even if you have blitzxdash, where they disagree often, that is only a temporary problem, they still will eventually end up in the same spot, eventually realizing they are the same, and then settle down to have genetically identical children who look exactly like their parents, if not the other route.
Just my two cents
Also, from a literary and not pseudo philisophical (Not sure if that ramble counts as philisophical), it seems really rushed.
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Pretty much. It baffles me why Blitz X Dash is such a huge pairing, but best to go with what you know. I hate SoarinDash unless it's played completely for laughs, but I don't hate the people who ship it. I just don't understand them.
And yeah, the story is incredibly rushed. I've been having trouble focusing on writing lately.
In fact, this first part of this video pretty much illustrates how I feel about how many people like this story. (Thanks for dealing with this dumb experiment btw)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=4fhGS0tAcQg#t=55s
Obviously it's applejohn or jack apple
Obviously it's applejohn or jack apple
Seems good so far, gonna keep my eye on this one
Although I do have to agree that the story is rushed, maybe you could find a way to fit in a chapter on how the male mane 6 got there, for those people who haven't read "On A Cross And Arrow" (<- good story, eh?)
Yeah, this story? Forget it, this was a waste of time to even bother with.
The moral of this experience? A set of pretty pictures on Deviantart doesn't make a good story.
When I saw it was canceled i was like... (BIG GASP) WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WAWA WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAWAAAAAAAAAAAWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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It really doesn't matter. I've been backlashing against this story since about a week after posting it. It was just a dumb idea and I can't believe it even got this far.
I guess I could have shifted gears and used this for universe building when it comes to that thing I've been hinting at in The 63 files, but that would mean actually updating this story. Sorry.
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) Now, back to where I left off... Ahem. THENNNNN... I was like eh, oh well, whateves.
Sorry peeps! I gotta go!
Bye!
Sky: AND THENNNNN... Someone stopped me from finishing the comment. *Glares at Blitz.*
Blitz: What?
Sky: You stopped me!
Blitz: So?
Sky: If you weren't my brother I'd just beat you up right now. (My character, Sky, is Blitz's sis and I'm Sky.
Pie: NOWWWWW... PARTAY TIME!!
Sky: YAY!!
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Wow, I can't even comment on that. For the record, I don't appreciate these kinds of roleplaying comments. Not to mention NOTHING in my comment would ever prompt such a comment to be made.
I'm glad I killed this story, it was such a waste of time.
Can I use this idea?
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AKA I don't want anything to do with this anymore. Go nuts and don't point to this as inspiration.
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Gotcha that, good buddy!
HJSDGCE what will your story be called?
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Message him about it. That's about that, not this story. It's bound to be not good antway, so why bother?
Make more!!!
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Do you people just choose not to read that part, or the 'cancelled' description, or the number of times I said, "No, I hate this story. Therefore it's not being updated."
Love it!
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Well I hate it.
3246905 you make pinkie sad
........ I don't see why
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Creator Backlash. This story was written on impulse, something I just don't do. I saw a bunch of pretty pictures on deviantart and thought, "yeah, I can make a story of this." Spoiler alert: bad idea.
Not to mention I completely changed my opinion on selfshipping within a few days of posting this story, from 'meh' to 'why does this garbage even exist?'
That's the basic gist of it, I just changed my mind about this and don't want anything to do with it anymore.
3249379 oh. Okay :)
punisher143 do you mind if I continue this story
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Everyone else wants to, so go on. I just want to forget this story.
Thanks