Finally a story wher the stallion use condom for sex and let the lady being up and not down as usual. I think the part where Twiluight lost her virginy was great too even if I think she made it a big harder and that's why it hert that why it huts her mutch.
Just a quick note, since ponies experience estrus (a rather obvious sign of when they're fertile) they wouldn't have to worry about pregnancy unless Twi was in heat, and she'd know it if she was. on a similar note, in case you decide to do it in the future, ponies have no gag reflex... run with it
681140 All fair points, although I prefer not to think about the anatomy too intimately. I've learned way too much about that subject in the name of proper research for stories. Although I do find the fact that they don't have a gag reflex to be kind of interesting. So thanks for sharing.
Not much draw towards it, but you seem to know how to write, so you get my like for that.
Why are some ponies genderbent?
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This is a mature extension of another of my stories called The 63 Files.
Hothothohothot...LIKE!
Eeh, It was pretty good...7/10
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Nice to know your insane side liked it. For me, it was at least good writing practice.
This is quiet good actually.
Finally a story wher the stallion use condom for sex and let the lady being up and not down as usual. I think the part where Twiluight lost her virginy was great too even if I think she made it a big harder and that's why it hert that why it huts her mutch.
still reading, but nice No More Heroes 2 reference
Edit: and done pretty good work
An enjoyable story, quite touching.
Just a quick note, since ponies experience estrus (a rather obvious sign of when they're fertile) they wouldn't have to worry about pregnancy unless Twi was in heat, and she'd know it if she was. on a similar note, in case you decide to do it in the future, ponies have no gag reflex... run with it
Looking forward to future chapters
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All fair points, although I prefer not to think about the anatomy too intimately. I've learned way too much about that subject in the name of proper research for stories. Although I do find the fact that they don't have a gag reflex to be kind of interesting. So thanks for sharing.
Oh god just when I had gotten over officer hotpants I see this. CURSE YOU
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"Why does the cake smell like baby oil? Oh god, WHERE'S PINKIE?!"
I liekz
when is next Chapter?
Really made me laugh