Super Duper Short story based from the Rarity Investigates episode.
Soarin and Rainbow Dash have a fight over trust issues after Soarin threatened to expel her from the Wonderbolts, but can their love be enough to keep them together? Or will some pony say something that they will regret.
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I realize it's another story with relationship conflict, I get the feeling that a lot of my stories will focus on it. I have noticed I tend to put personal experiences into these, a lot of my past is full of conflict and emotional roller coasters.
Geo edited this for me again and I will add a cover once I get the new PC running again. (moving house this week)
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So sweet...
Also, your editor did a wonderful job.
Good job! It was nice, short and sweet!
Awww, it's adorable!
I had to bite my finger to stop squealing at the cuteness
Why the sad tag? There was a lot of feels but they were, happy feels, Ya Know?
Cute! But I agree with moonrose on the sad tag thing
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Having a fight with your partner isnt a happy feeling. Thats why i put the tag
SO FRICKEN ADORABLE!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!
Ok-ok...serious time.
The story was great, as you kept it at a smooth pace and the content and quality for it was excellent. I will point out that Dash was a little too emotional, screaming and such, but I have absolutely no right to talk as I usually make her cry 0-0
Keep doing what you do and I would LOVE to see more of Soarindash from you >u<
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Thank you ^^
I should point out that ive based Dashie on myself, as im the hardcore tomboy type that hates being girly (in public), i base the SoarnxDash relationship on my own too. One part i hate about myself is that i do snap at people when im upset, since Dash is a hot head, i figured that she would have an unstable explosive attitude when being angry or upset ^^;
Cute story. I love me some SoarinDash!
6481044 Huh...I just realized I do the same thing when I write Dashie. I tend to cry alot or cut when i get upset ^^"
However, I get what you mean. It makes sense for Dash to act that when she gets upset.
Cute! Enough to satisfy my shipometer…………… FOR NOW
I like the post episode story here ^^ awh it was ooohhh do more one shots!
It's nice, but I felt Rainbow was too quick to forgive.
I personally think she would have dragged this out a lot longer, hell I would have. But then again, I also thought Soarin in the episode was an abrupt asshole and Rainbow needed to stick up for herself.
This was very sweet.
SEQUEL!
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i need some more inspiration first
I ship it
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I agree. Maybe a one shot of rainbow chewing him out for having so little faith in her. And warning him that if he ever hurts her like that again they are through.