• Published 29th Aug 2015
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Love Letters - Vinyl-ScratchDJ17



Her changlings are dying, and there is nothing she can do. So she writes to Princess Celestia.

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The Funeral

"My dear friends, and family." Celestia began. "We gather here today to honor those we have lost."

It was a gloomy afternoon, a funeral was being held for Chrysalis's deceased child. taking place at Rainbow Falls, which was grey with depression, and sorrow. Especially for Chrysalis, who only wished to see the true smile of joy on her son's face. But, due to the epidemic that could have wiped her species of the face of the planet, that is not what happened.

"Ones who only wanted love, and to be loved. Ones who did not deserve these early graves. But alas," Luna sighed, next to Celestia. "Fate has chosen this path for them. You may still have doubt for these changlings, but they mean no harm. May we forget their actions at the canterlot wedding, for it was not their intent. They were drove to do so...by other means." She gave a sourfull look to Chrysalis who had been standing next to her by the casket, decorated with flowers, and a large photo of Nyamphador on top.

"Today, we honor the death of a child who's mother who was once evil, but now our friend." She smiled at Chrysalis, placing a foreleg on her shoulder. Chrysalis only smiled in return, only for a second, until the stress of her dead son came crawling back.

Chrysalis gazed out to to all the patrons. The mane six were there, Discord, Princess Cadence, Shining Armor, among other ponies on one side of the aisle, and the other side was made up of changlings. If anything that made her feel worse, was the fact she almost ruined a wedding. As of now, she can't understand how anybody could be so rotten. Yet, she knew why she did the things she did.

Mad with power, and the feeling of being unstoppable. The only thing she cared about was keeping her empire of changlings a float in a world against them. Shedcould have cared less about anyone else in Equestria. Now, seeing how she could have just made some sort of agreement with Celestia, none of this would have happened. She knew this was all her fault. How bad she felt about it all, and the slight embarrassment kept her from admitting her feelings about the situation.

"Maybe, Chrysalis would like to say something before we bury her son," Said Luna with a reassuring smile.

"Oh. Um...yeah."Chrysalis replied, coming out of her stressful trance. She took Celestia's place at the podium, and cleared her throat. "Um...I'm not exactly sure what to say..." She began. "My son...every now and again...he would ask me why we couldn't be friends with ponies. Being a child with dreams, hopes and wishes, I couldn't bring myself to tell him our species were mortal enimies at the time. Especially with...what I...with some of my...past actions..." She blushed, rubbing the back of her neck with a hoof. "He didn't like being stuck in a dark cave, isolated from the world. Because of me, being who I was...he never got to even say a word to any of you ponies. Because of me, he's about to be placed in a grave, buried in dirt, because I was...stubborn to listen to him." She sniffed as tears began to rush down her cheeks. "Thats why I began writing to Celestia for help. Luckily, she agreed to help, but sadly he died before she came. She say me holding him in my arms, limp, and vacant of any signs of life. And it's my fault." She cried, unable to keep herself together, turning to Celestia, who took her in a warm hug. Celestia herself was even crying, along with other patrons, such as the mane six. Discord let out a few sniffles, but that was all, as they clap to Chrysalis's beautiful speech.

Celestia held Chrysalis in her hug for a few more seconds,before letting go. "Maybe you'd like to say a few words to your son before the burial," she said softly, wiping a tear from Chrysalis's eye. She nodded, and slowly walked over to the casket. Inside, her only child lay inside. His forelegs crossed over his chest, eyes closed, mouth dropped open slightly, in an eternal peaceful slumber, calling to the heavens to take him in.

"I'm sorry, my son. I should have taken your advice, and maybe you'd still be here with us, along with the hundreds of changlings who died before you. I loved you so much, and did what any mother could do. But, even though you're gone now, I'm sure you'd want to see me smile like when you saw me when we got that letter from Celestia. So, I'll try to get by and be happy for you. And, I'm sorry you never got to meet your father. But, he's with us now, and maybe he might say something for you too."

Upon hearing this, caused confusion throughout everypony. Chrysalis hated herself mostly for that. Her son never got to see the wonderful father he had. She knew that as soon as she points him out, they will most likely he angry with her. But this isn't about her, and she knew it. She had to do what was right for her son, being the last time anybody will see him. She turned to the crowd.

"Shining Armor...would you like to say something for your son?"

Gasps were heard, and an evil glare was given to her from Cadence.

Now being the center of attention, Shining wasn't sure what to do. He stuttered and looked who his wife for approval. She too didn't really understand the situation, but only sighed, and motioned for him to go. He sighed heavily, knowing the only way he could have done such a thing with Chrysalis, was when she was impersonating Cadence. Thought, upon thought flew through his mind about how he couldnt understand he did what he did.

Knowing he had a dead son he never saw, he at least did what was right, and he got up and made his way over to Chrysalis, next to the casket. He felt a bit uncomfortable being so close to her, but he put that aside, and looked down into the casket. He saw a changling. Not just any changling. This one was his son. He felt happy in a way, and upset and angered at the all same time. He always wanted a son, now he's looking at him. He was happy for that, but he was sad he wanted his son with his dear wife. The mad portion of it came from Chrysalis never telling him.

"Hey there, squirt. It's your dad, I guess. Um...sorry you never got to see me. If I knew you exsisted, I'd love to have seen you, and formed some sort of a bond. Your mother...you should be proud of, seeing how she must have raised you well, and had changed her ways. I don't know if you can hear me or not, but...I love you, son." Shining smiled somewhat. "Just seeing you for the first time, but it's a fathers job to love his child. I wish I could have been able to say it, and for you to hear me. Albeit, this situation for me is a bit weird, but, if you can hear me, just know I love you." He sighed, and leaned forward, and gave Nyamphador a kiss on the tip of his horn.

"Thanks." Chrysalis said. "It means a lot to me. I know you must be mad, and confused, and if you don't forgive me, I understand. And Cadence," she turned her head to see Cadence coming up to her. "The same goes for you. You must be angry I did...that with your husband. All I ask is you don't be mad at him for my actions. He had no clue what was going on. Besides, I was using a spell on him to make him do what I wanted him to. Be mad, only at me. And, to both of you I'm very sorry."

Cadence sighed. "I forgive you." She hugged Chrysalis. "I was mad at first, but, I don't want to be making any angry rants, because this isn't the time, and you had just lost your son, and all."

"Thank you, Cadence." She hugged the princess of love in return, giving a bittersweet sigh. She then let go, and took one last look at her son.

"Where ever you are now, my little Nyamphador, may they treat you well. Goodbye my son. Mommy loves you." She gave her son a kiss, and even though he didn't say it, she could swear he said,

"I love you too."

She lowered her head, tears filling her eyes, until she heard,

"Mom?"

Author's Note:

If there is anything you guys think I can do to improve, please let me know, and all critisism is welcome. Just don't be rude about it XD and thanks for reading :D

Confused about the end? Changlings need love to survive. Her kiss brought him back to life :D

Comments ( 98 )

Oh god... I'm crying here... Take the favourite....

Dat ending was just like

O SHIT

DAT PLOT TWIST DOE

M KNIGHT SHYAMALAN WOULD BE PROUD

Good stuff bud. The beginning Chapter was very similar to BlabideeblahMLP fic. But on yours, It really shows that you put more time and thought into it. Not that were knocking Blabideeblah's story. Both are superb.

Also nice twist in chapter two.

6379866 thanks :D I wanted it to be bittersweet. Funeral thinking he's dead for good, but chrysalis's love for Nymphy, brought him back to life with her kiss. Love brah.

I don't read sad stories.

6381674 well, it's happy at the end :D it's nothing that will make you cry, unless you're really soft. I wrote this just to give the feeling of potty for Chrysalis, but that's it. The end is happy, though.

6381679
Uhhhhhhhhhh fine.

+1 story added to read it later

6381684 you don't have to read it if you don't want to :D

6381684 I also meant pitty not potty XD

6374751 Great! I can't wait! :pinkiehappy:

6389299 the second chapter was the epilogue. :D

6389304 Awesome! 'Bout to read it now!

6389304 NOOO!!! It cannot end like that!!! And the feels! Omg, the feels! Just... Wow! :raritycry: :pinkiesad2: :heart:

6389461 why can't it end like that?

6389461 is there some other way it should end or extend it a tiny bit?

6389731 I think there should be another chapter with a happy ending where Shining and cadence visits Nymphador (was that his name? Something like that.) and chrysalis every so often and they're like a big family. Also the changelings and ponies live in peace. That's my Idea anyway, you can proberly come up with a better one.

6389782 that's actually a really good idea :D

Dude............you totally had me thinking who was the father of Nyamphador! I was trying to think who it was, and when I saw the name, I was like, "Oh. My. Celestia!" And even better, I was also thinking the son would come back to life right before Chrysalis.

This was a great story! But I do believe there could be a sequel to the story. :raritystarry:

6390326 I will be making another chapter for this, but until then...can I get a like?

6390358

That's great! :yay:

And I pressed the like button! :pinkiehappy:

6391469 actually, this took me three and a half hours. Well, four at most. And, I don't see a plot hole in mine. Yes I can agree it wasn't written as well. And there actually was a huge change of you even read the second chapter. also, it didn't take Celestia two and a half months to say something. That's another change. Mine also explained why they weren't getting the love they need to feed off of. It even had a few plot twists in the second chapter. Although, of you have any ideas for improvment, I'll gladly take them, and maybe use them to better the story. Mainly write off of the ideas people give me.

6389791 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Although I don't think it's that good.

That... I tip my hat at you. I agree, this version is better than the original. I don't mind sad stories, but I much prefer a happier ending. And this ending, it was just what I was hoping for while reading this.

I don't see a plot hole anywhere. Celestia took much fewer letters to come this time around, just enough to get past her justified doubts about Chrysalis being honest. She acted in character in my honest opinion.

I openly admit, I started crying once her son died and kept crying until the end of the funeral. But the ending was worth it. Short, but dispelling my gloom in an instant. This so needs a sequel.

I picked up some typos, would it be okay if I proofread it and send you the corrected version via pm?

Again, I loved it. Call me a sentimental fool, but that ending made me feel really warm.

Cya
Raziel-chan

That was Beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes... And that's saying alot. This is the second sad story to bring me close to crying. I love it, and would like to see a sequel. 6440650 I agree.

6440950 awe thanks, and yes that would be nice for you to do that :D sorry for making you cry :fluttercry:
6457449 it's hard to make me cry. Unless it's me coming up with a sad story, where I imagine myself as the character who is being inflicted with said sadness, then I shed a tear or two :p

6457635 Lol, I've only cried to "The Final Dreams of a Fill, " and this one. :pinkiehappy: Also, favorited.

6457890 NO, THANK YOU, YOU, SON OF A B****:flutterrage:

6460823 -gives bloody roses- Please, don't be sad. :pinkiecrazy:

6461286 -keeps holding the roses out, smiles insanely- Do you like? :pinkiecrazy:

6461316 me like. -takes them, and gives you a miniature live version of rainbow dash- you like?

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