My Deathwish

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I wish to feel alive.

That is my only and greatest wish.

I wish to feel alive...

And die like that.

((if this had a theme song it would be this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2tKFBZ2ki4))
NOW WITH AUDIO READING! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qAkrplMQ_g.

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PurpleAcid

PurpleAcid #1 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

wow thats so sad seen from this point of view
tho for being what he is i can understand what he has gone through

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #2 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

7257883 This was sort of inspired by the Hollows in Bleach and Nnoitra's words. Perhaps Ulquiorra's too. I don't exactly watch the whole anime but I am aware of the story.

Btw this isn't meant to be a great story of quality and whatever. So I apologize for that. Nevertheless if you like it thanks for the feedback!

PurpleAcid

PurpleAcid #3 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

7257903 well it leaves questions like what happened before this
and gives ok but could use more detail to what's going on
but otherwise it hits the feels

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #4 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

7257933 Largely speaking it doesn't matter much. It's just froufrou stuff that don't add any substance. True I might have had to say where they are, or when, and how they got there but... let's just say I leave that up to you. As is up to you guys if you want to continue it.

Level Dasher

Level Dasher #5 · May 29th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Interesting. Sad and just a tiny bit disturbing, but interesting. Nice job.

The Sexy Barbarian

The Sexy Barbarian #6 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

Great story, really interesting look at how a changeling might feel.

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #7 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

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7258014 Thanks guys. Really appreciated. You guys are free to do with this little tidbit anything you like.

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #8 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

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7257933 Something about this. This isn't clear if he dies in the end so if someone wants to take the story and write his own, or write a sequel of a prequel or whatever you guys are free to do so. I deliberately left almost everything open here and gave as little info as possible. "She" could not even be Chrysalis for that matter. Just food for thought.

Level Dasher

Level Dasher #9 · May 29th, 2016 · 1 · ·

7258070 Like you said, you've got a lot open to do with this what we would, but I just don't have the time. I've got one story I'm already working on that has my full attention at the moment. I hope someone else can take this gem you've started and turn it into something good, since you've given permission.

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #10 · May 29th, 2016 · · ·

7258089 It's cool. Ty btw.

Level Dasher

Level Dasher #11 · May 29th, 2016 · 2 · ·

7258110 You're welcome. Here's hoping the ~~write righter~~ right writer comes along. *raises glass*

Fluttersherp

Fluttersherp #12 · May 30th, 2016 · · ·

First of all, great story. The way you develop the unknown life of a lone changeling is quite fascinating and enjoyable. So, I was thinking of starting up a Youtube channel separate from the one I already have where I want to start doing fanfiction readings, and I wanted to know if you would be alright with me reading it on the channel?

nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #13 · May 31st, 2016 · · ·

7261339 Sure whatever you think. As I said below you guys are free to do with this whatever you will. So long as I get credit for the idea/original that's totally fine. I got more works if you like. Anyway keep in touch.

Fluttersherp

Fluttersherp #14 · May 31st, 2016 · · ·

7262318 All right, thank you. I will most definitely be giving you credit. I'll tell you when the video goes up. By the way, it's not going to be that good, just as a warning. I'm just starting so I won't be having like voice actors or anything. Thank you again.

nioniosbbbb