Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have been friends for years, and honestly, Silver Spoon is getting tired of it. More specifically, she is tired of Diamond Tiara's behavior, seeing as at best she has not changed, and at worst has become even more of a bully.
When Diamond Tiara finally does something the Silver Spoon sees a going to far, the two finally get into a fight of their own. When all is said and done, what will remain between the two, and what will one of them do?
[This story is inspired by the image of the same title by MustLoveFrogs. It should be noted that while inspired by it, this story is in no way shape or form connected to the artist or her own story (which is very interesting on its own both in the individual images, and in the connected comic she's working on). Although, if someone with a deviantart account could tell her about it, I would appreciate it.]
Nice chapter and an interesting start. Just one tiny little thing. You're missing a quotation mark near the end.
6376078 Technically it wasn't missing. It was Silver Spoon saying the next line as well. The general rule I understand is that if a character is talking and a new paragraph begins, the quotation mark is left open on the end of the previous one, but the mark is still placed at the beginning of the new one. Honestly, it was bothering me too though. So there's now an additional sentence in between.
Oh great, it's another one of these.
The only saving grace is the possibility that Silver will realize how much her friend actually means to her.
I like Silver Spoon's internal thoughts, hearing what Diamond Tiara was saying to her. I feel like you're adding depth to her character.
Nice chapter, but there's a couple things you may want to edit.
That is kinda confusing.
And you may want to add, "thing" between the two words and and change the last one to "being".
6390193 Okay. The first part should be clearer now.
6390259 Thanks.
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