Huh, Spider Gwen?

Good story, I think it has potential. You might want to slow the pacing a bit.

Is she 'merican'

Sounds interesting, nice idea, but saying it again mate, you just had some energy legs, and Mother Nature is telling you to slow down, so just try and fix up your Pacing

Well, I like this story so far lets see ware this...
(reads kiss seine)
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6317575 thank you for your feed back, I'll be sure to take this and redo the story in a more fluent way, ya know, if i can. Obviously i still have a lot of problems as a writer as you can see. Seriously, thanks.

Yes

To fast.

Need more please, I want to see how well it goes between her and RD

I like it

A little fast paced But I can't blame ya' I also go a bit fast sometimes

Live for the Swarm.

...oh, sorry, wrong Kerrigan. Nevermind.

decent but like others have said way way too fast

Mary Sue. Fuck this.

I came for the spooder I stay for the possible snu-snu.

I suddenly want to crossover...

anymore?

Question: Update?

6317924
I really like this story alot please upload more chapters soon and keep me posted on the update on the story

Would've been nice to see this story continue

Good more

“So, for my first question I’d like to ask you, and this has nothing to do with what happened earlier, but, are you gay?” Oh this is going to be a long and very interesting next few minutes.

WTF.