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Holy shit, someone who actually understands how we hunted. That's a rare sight.
As long as I get to watch.
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This is really quite good. I do hope (pray) that you continue this story.
Gr8 story m8.
I'm having trouble comparing sizes. How small/tall is he exactly? Compared to the Anthro's. And what height are they?
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She's twice as tall as he is, and he feels smaller than he was. It's safe to assume that he's about 3 ft and she's about 5 1/2 to 6 ft.
I like this you could probably make this into a longer story if you tried good job keep it up
This was rather sweet.
I think it would be funny if somehow he met a woman who was doing the same act and the two were left to... do what comes naturally for the sake of all bald apes everywhere. But things don't go as he would like. Sort of the pampered pet meeting the feral animal thing.
6377504 Ah fair enough. So about the height of a 10 year old?
I was expecting something of lower quality.
I am pleasantly surprised.
Hmm. Haven't seen this done before. Interesting. Would have preferred a happier ending though. He didn't get laid, and she passed out drunk and heartbroken. Nobody won, here. They could have both won.
This story was cute and light in its own way. Really liked how "Wuvs" interacted with the other Pets.
How valid are his fears about being vivisected or dissected by Twilight after he reveals himself to be a sapient, thinking, feeling, speaking being?
Fears of being beaten into the ground for his adventures with Fluttershy's breasts are perfectly reasonable, but past that?
Got a pastebin for that green?
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http://pastebin.com/ATzDkwgd
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Thanks. I'm kind of surprised to see that the original green text flows almost as well as the FimFiction acceptable prose revision, though both are, IMO, well done. Was this written for a particular thread? I only ask because both Animal Anon and Marquess Anon (another good story, and a decent bit of world building) have anthro ponies, which I find oddly appealing. Because apparently I'm a closet fur-fag. Who knew?
Will you be bringing either Marquess or Canterlot Cult to FimFiction?
This seems like such a waste to leave it as a simple one-shot.
6733283 agreed
This is actuelly interesting.
Seems like a waste to leave it as a One-shot.