I like writing stories and I love Apple Bloom and Rainbow Dash with all my heart. Just to let you know, my work from now on will be DBZ influenced.
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Suggestion for when you get to the part where the bullies die in later chapter add music, get Applebloom to sing, or both (tarantino it up).
6303949 Hahahahaha!
It's worth mentioning you should spoiler that.. This is the first thing I saw, now its ruined
I absolutely love this story so far. I want to see way more in the future! Favorited+tracked!
If you want an editor to help you out, I'm here for you mate.
6304598 Sorry, if you're talking about the bullies dieing it wasn't ment to be a spoiler it was for the later if that was to really happen.
I like it so far!
How did you like it? This one was very fun to make!
(I would put this in a bottom note but it's not working)
well buck a duck sideways on a Thursday this is awesome. up vote.
I want to watch DT bleed, and I want to hear her scream!
So... now it's time to play One Winged Angel?
The Evil Within, dear lord that title sounds creepy...
*Looks at the Video Game*
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I just brought that game yesterday and I was out of names for the titles so I just said fuck it
The hell is going on here?
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It will be explained soon (Well mostly in this story and the rest will be explained in the sequel)
6318711 How scary is it? Is it a good game?
6318761 the evil withen is a horrible game... you'll most likey only do the game once or quit right off the bat... the game is trollish like dark souls... the game is not scary in the slightest...
As for this chapter....This was a great chapter! can't wait to see more..
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Well it depends on what kind of horror games you like, I personally have only played a little bit and I don't like it that much I just got to the part where you escape the mad man with the chainsaw. The animation is awesome though
Did you mean "Are you deaf?"
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Sorry about that I'm going to fix that
This story isn't making sense anymore. I'm sick of reading stupid nightmare after nightmare.. Please actually write something that takes place in the real world.
6351298 Yeah the next chapter is where it gets real and she plans to kill Silver Spoon and after that Diamond Tiara
What in the 13 levels and 9 circles of blue hell is this? No seriously, wha- I don't even- huh?
I'm done here, that's it.
6351384 Yeah, I can't even either...
So... did Apple Bloom kill both her father and the rapist or what?
Well oh dam.
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Dude, really? Spoiling your own story?
6358389 Sorry I should've P.M that
This is what comes to mind when I read this story.
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I would've gone with "The Vengeful One" (because the voice that's trying to take control wants to hurt those that have hurt Applebloom), but Down With the Sickness is a great one as well for this
Hehe MORE!!!!!plz
NICE!
*ready to die - andrew wk plays in head*
This reminds me of 'Lil Miss Rarity and Cupcakes.
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Yes! Cupcakes HD
Ponies who are crazy do not know they are crazy. A.B. knows she is crazy, therefore she isn't crazy, isn't that crazy?
Was the completely incorrect usage of camel case neccessary? other than that, It's great to get the good part!
My fucking sides XD
Ummmmmm running away from x now
How come she is in that stupid school and figuring out how to deal with bullies since her intelligence should have already give her those answers?
6431851 Because, IQ is more like basic intelligence. What your asking about is social skills. IQ and social skills are completely different.
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Applebloom sucks then. I encountered many kids with less IQ that know how to deal with this stuff.
Oh fuck your screwed apple bloom
I learned how to maniacally laugh from this
Update?