Why did Twilight attend? She received an invitation to a ball, exclusively for time travellers, and seemingly innocent. Twilight accepts, for reasons she keeps to herself, but time has other plans. Namely, erasing everyone in attendance. While trying to balance her responsibility as a Princess and a friend with the looming destruction of hundreds, Twilight will have to overcome one of the greatest villains in the universe: Time. It continues to march on, even if that means a few casualties. With the help of some old friends, and a few new ones, Twilight seeks to unravel the mystery before time unravels her.
Written for Hazardous Writing Materials, specifically the Anachronistic Stories contest.
Cover Art by ThePristineEye, so check their page out!
Previous Art by Thaumic, and you should check this out also!
Please give me some feedback! I would love to hear it, as I need some help with my writing.
Prologue is spelt as prologue, not prolouge.
Other than that this looks really nice. I'll have to give it a read later.
6344876 Thanks! I really appreciate the help!
...........this is a really interesting and hard to follow story that makes me want to keep reading it. i hate you for it, and i love you for it. keep up the good work. gonna be tracking this.
6366215 Thank you for your comment! With any luck, I can pull this off while making some sort of reasonable sense. Check out the Anachronistic Stories link for more stories even more complex than mine!
..............well then
Wot is dis?? U must be a genus to rite dis
Review I promised is here.
Curse my inability to not hit the next chapter button. Still awesome story and very well written, like and follow