End Credits
Hello there, Lt. Voss here. First off, I want to thank you all for reading Broken Wings. It means a whole ton to me, and I am immensely happy to see it received with such positive welcome. Seeing this story end has literally been painful for me. I had grown to love the story, its characters, and its purpose that doing what I had to do to end it tore me up inside. It really did.
Secondly, I want to thank those in my life that both inspired this story and helped me through everything. Special thanks to:
- Kendra and Elsa, my case workers, for being there for me when I needed them.
- Dr. Brown, my psychiatrist, for getting me the help I needed.
- lilinuyasha, a writer here on fimfiction, and all his Facebook friends for stopping me from killing myself.
- Micah, a friend of mine on Steam, who also kept me from doing bad things to myself.
- Seth Jones, for pushing me out of the way of the car. R.I.P., Seth.
- Michael Anderson, for giving me a shoulder to cry girly tears on (and like, 3 manly ones).
- You readers, for loving this story, giving me incentive to continue writing it. Without you, this story would have no end in sight.
- My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and Lauren Faust, for giving me a show I would watch just to keep myself alive.
Thank you.
Luna shifted through the burnt rubble and debris, looking for anything that might have survived the fire of Will's home. Remembering, not for the first time that day, that her son and her husband, Bill the Oracle, were dead sent shivers down her spine and more tears to her eyes. She had assistance from Celestia, and together they combed the wreckage. Even Twilight chose to help.
Moving upstairs, what was left of it, Luna, Celestia, and Twilight began their second search. Almost immediately, they found a box, lying on its side, on the floor. It appeared to be made of metal, as some parts of it were still shiny, though the rest was scorched black and burnt. The sisters stooped to open it, and found several papers inside. They did not expect the papers to contain what they did.
The first was a formal document, written in letterhead. At the top of the sheet, the document was clearly marked with large letters, "Will's Will." A ghost of a smile touched Luna's lips; she always thought her son's humour was rather simple. Reading through it, she found several articles describing what the ponies should do should Will be found dead. Included were articles as follows:
- Will be buried beside Big McIntosh at the Sweet Apple Acres' cemetery.
- All of Will's possessions be given to Fluttershy and their foals.
- In the event that article II could not be completed, requisition the Royal Sisters of Equestria to take possession of indicated items until article II could be completed, indefinitely, if need be.
Luna's tears stained the paper, and she gave it to Celestia, who gave it a quick skim and began her crying as well. When the two could pick up another document without ruining the lettering, Luna did so. The second paper was almost completely blank except for three blocks of text in the center, with a single line after that. Somewhat separated from the "main" text was what appeared to be an acknowledgement. The text read:
Today a strange thing happened
I thought my life would end
But I had a helpful friend
Who had advice to lend.
Today was a stressful one
My thoughts were of a gun
But I gave the advice a run
And now the day is won.
I have survived the day
Bad thoughts are pushed away
There is not much more to say
But I have survived the day.
And I owe it all to you.
Written below the poem was a thank you from Will, with his easily identifiable chicken scratch cursive.
"Thank you, Luna, for stopping me. I really appreciate it; it showed me that there is still another day to live, another dawn to see."
- Will
Special thanks to lilinuyasha. This poem I wrote the day after he stopped me from committing suicide. It is dedicated to him. Thank you, friend.
Luna could do no more to restrain her tears. Celestia barely snatched the poem from her sister before she ruined the lettering and destroyed it. Not that she fared much better; Celestia too flooded the room with her own droplets. She set the paper aside and hugged her sister. The two sat there, embracing and sobbing, for several minutes. Finally, Luna gained the courage to pick up the third and final paper in the box. She read aloud:
"Whoever receives this, know that you are only able to see this because... because I am no longer here. First of all, I want to thank those who have impacted my life for the better. Special gratitude, I show to:
- First Lieutenant (Staff Sergeant was crossed out) Mason Valeral, for being my best friend.
- Richard Loring, for forging my first sword.
- Corporal Steve Davis for being there for me. (Written in a different hand, the line continues) I'm sorry, Mary, for losing him.
- Applejack, for being honest and forgiving, teaching me that I could forgive others who have wronged me.
- Nurse Redheart, for healing Fluttershy.
- Twilight Sparkle, for reminding me that I should be considerate towards others' feelings."
At the mention of her part, Twilight tears up. She had hated Will since the moment he told her he and Fluttershy were in love. But now... now, Twilight could not find it in her heart to keep hating him. Even past all the amnesty, Will found it in his to forgive Twilight and thank her. Twilight simply could not keep the fires burning, and a tear rolled down her cheek. But the list went on.
"- Mister Cake, for defending me.
- Pinkie Pie, for cheering me up.
- Rainbow Dash, for keeping my spirits high.
- Ambassadors Nolan DeFieres and Johnathan Lyle, for reminding me to be bold and seek friendship everywhere.
- Princess Celestia, who was an aunt to me, the only one I had. R.I.P. (R.I.P. was crossed out, replaced with:) You taught me that being compassionate rewarded me greatly.
- Princess Luna, my mother. You taught me how to forge, understand Equestrian literature and art, and so much more. You revealed to me that you were my mother and that I had not murdered my parents, and for that I am eternally grateful. I just wish I could be around to be with you forever. Know this, though: Though I am gone, I will continue to be with you in spirit. The gentle breeze that passes your cheek will be my soul. The whispers in sleep and in wake will be me, soothing you and calming you. It's the least I can do.
- And finally, Fluttershy, my wife. My time with you has been wonderful. You have taught me so much about kindness and friendship, and what it means to be a husband. I hope that I have served you to the best of my ability, and that I will be in your heart forever. I just wish that I had more to say for you, my love, but words cannot describe or explain how I feel about you. The least it, I Love You."
Luna slowly set down the paper, and whispered so softly that Celestia and Twilight strained to hear, "Ego amare etiam, Will."
Ending Song:
"To those who are Lost," by Jeremy Soule, made for the Company of Heroes(tm) soundtrack "Songs from the Front."
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Okay, sorry for posting in an already "completed" story, but I forgot to add this part in, and I wanted to make sure everyone saw this so I made a new chapter.
Don't know what else to say that I haven't said in this chapter, so enjoy.
I have to admit I was hoping the sad ending was a joke, or that there was an extended alternate ending, or something...guess not.
I really enjoyed this story while it lasted, and it pains me to see it over. I hope you write some more stuff in the future.
Take all my sadz...
This ending was so damn good, I don't even give a shit about how Harry died!
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EVERYBODY GIVE IT UP FOR THIS AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT MAN!
449407 "Why?! Why, God?! Why would you leave me, Will?! I loved you Will!"
Celestia to Luna: "It will be alright, Luna. It will be alright."
Luna to Celestia: "No, it will not be alright! I have now lost two husbands and my only son!"
Chapter 20 saying: "I love you too, Will."
I studied Latin because it's a way-cool language to speak, even though it's a dead language and everyone you speak to will have a different "version" because the "correct" one is impossible (or nearly so) to find.
And now a line in the Old Irish tongue of my forefathers.
Is féidir chuid eile i saighdiúir síocháin óga tú aisling go deo níos mó this translates too. "rest in peace young soldier may you dream forever more"
449516 Thanks dawg.
449516 Also, is it alright if I mention Will in my story?
450406 How so?
451235 Well, in the story, the main character just happens to be a child of Luna. I was hoping to have him ask her about what's bothering her and whatnot, then she drops it about Will. It wouldn't conflict with the story in any way. My character's a teenager, and Will was a grown-ass-man when he died. So...
451235 When I made him Luna's son, I hadn't made it to the particular chapter in which Will discovers this, so no, I didn't steal it.
Rest In Peace, Will... Rest In Peace. May your soul find it's way to the Paradise. Amen.
454598 In that case, sure. I would think that'd be pretty cool (in a perverse sort of way).
"Luna, mother, could you tell me what's wrong?"
Luna looked sadly at [Character Name], then away. She didn't answer at first, but when she did her voice was strained. "I... it's just that... I had a son... Will... Victor... he was thirty three, had a wife, two kids... a best friend named Bill... he was my husband..." Luna gasped involuntarily, the effort of holding back her tears becoming very taxing. She was only barely restraining herself. "I lost them all... Will killed himself, when his family was murdered, after he found who did it and punished him... he jumped off a building... and Bill went with him..."
[Character] moved to comfort his mother. He hated to see her cry, as she could not hold back the flood of tears any longer. Not knowing what to say, he fell back on the most common phrase, "There, there. I'm here, mother. I'm still here."
Just a little inspiration hit me for this. :P
455146 O___O
Welp, that was fast. XD
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful Rest in piece Will and fluttershy
I SALUTE YOU SIR
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IT'S SO SAD
1833295 *shrinks back*
Please stop yelling... please...
I didn't intend for anything to happen. Here's what happened...
1. Sees fimfiction.net
2. Listens to song
3. Dreams up a fanfiction of his own
4. Plans for happy ending
5. Depression goes from being mildly intrusive to shoving the nearest sharp object into chest
6. Ending changes from happy to sad
7. Receives anti-depressants
8. Ending goes back to happy
9. Medication loses potency
10. Depression comes back full force
11. Ending goes back to horrible-death-ending
I'm sorry...
2930697 I apologise for that. I was a pretty terrible writer starting out (though I am glad my readers said I improved [however slightly] over the chapters). Unfortunately I did in fact try and edit that first chapter into a longer one (later on) to show a better movement of time, but if I remember correctly a site update occurred shortly after I finished and reverted the chapter back to its original breakneck pace. I did try to rectify that reversion as best as I could, but I have a horrible memory and just couldn't remember all of my edits.
I do hope you stick around to read the rest, though. Thanks for taking a while to read it!
A man with nothing to lose....is no longer a full man. He is a shadow of himself. Losing the love of your life, and your blood....well...that would force nearly anyone to shut down, I believe. I know if I lost it all like he did...I do believe I would just shut down.